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Doublee Bleu (Reversed-Verse)

create for me a song so blue, that doves dare swoon 'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries swallowed ~ swallowed 'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries so blue, that doves dare swoon for me a song create

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Date: 7/8/2010 1:52:00 PM
cool on both the verses..P.D.
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:44:00 AM
Very good on both meaning ...Very romantic feel ...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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