Double Rainbows

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About three summers ago, we had a double rainbow to appear in the middle of a storm..It had been years since I had seen a rainbow...I don't know if my eyes had been closed and were opened or if there had not been any rainbows..

double rainbows double promises.. in storm's midst

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Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2012 9:41:00 PM

What a fantastic write, simply fantastic! Yes, double rainbows do produce double promises...I do believe in that! Great Work!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2012 5:23:00 PM

Wow! A whole new way for me to look at double rainbows. I have seen them sometimes, but never thought of them as "double promises." Lovely write, Sara. Winning wishes in the rainbow contest! Love, carolyn

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/13/2012 4:54:00 PM

Ahhhh!!! Wonderful point Sara!! Well done...best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya deb

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/13/2012 4:55:00 PM

oh, and HAPPY MOTHERS' DAY~~~!!! :) you're in my thoughts and prayers