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Written on October 2, 2023

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Double Jeopardy

Risk Falling Into him, Mysterious Insight embracing Feelings, exciting hearts Flames in bold scarlet, rising Like the morning startling the night Freeing the soul from its darkness, love Erasing all worries, the tears destroyed By winds of yesterday’s grace, subsiding Providing the nerve and strength needed The dream traps doubt in its clutches Freeing the mind to believe, Feeling beyond our grasp, Light falling softly, Pleading whispers Insights, stars Twinkling Fears
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Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Precarious foothold - have faith. :) Congratulations Gina! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 11:09 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Gina ... beautiful and deep emotions :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:04 AM
“The dream traps doubt in its clutches” a very deep line that is and more! Meaningful etheree that conveys such uplifting and soulful thoughts in a flawless manner! Whilst ensuring your syllables remain intact throughout! Well delivered as always! Your way with words is stunning! Congratulations on winning. Pleasure reading
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 10:09 AM
How well you constructed this Etheree. Resembles a tear from my poor eyes. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Gorgeous emotionally and visually.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:01 AM
So emotive! Very nice, Gina!
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