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Double Double Words , Twilight Gleaming


T Tassels of stardust flicker across 
    clouds ' awninG
W Where beams radiant flaunt their
     heavenly appeaL 
I Igniting nightfall to weave more hues , 
  ornatE :
L Livening  twilight's show ,on sky's
    panoramA:
I Into kliegs of this pageant...ray of glory 
  enhances our dreaM
G Guiding our fervor, our trail like a 
     quest from holy MagI; 
H Hope abides now, a lasting balm
    against fears unbiddeN
T Then  to rest, to wish upon twilight's 
    tasseled winG !

    

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Date: 7/7/2024 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely done
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Date: 7/6/2024 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely Double Acrostic write. I really enjoyed reading this one... Have a great day/weekend..............
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Date: 7/5/2024 8:09:00 AM
Dear Nette, I'm seriously impressed by your poem. I just loved the way you've crafted an acrostic. It is so incredibly clever and shows some serious wordsmithing skills on your part. Your imagery is absolutely gorgeous, too. I can practically see those "tassels of stardust" flickering across the sky as I read. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/3/2024 2:37:00 PM
Nicely done Nette..
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Date: 7/3/2024 10:04:00 AM
Yours is one of the best I have seen. Are you around now? I am on my phone but if you comment on my poems that you are around, I will get on my computer and try to do the FB thing with you
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Date: 7/3/2024 6:54:00 AM
Stunning, Nette, you have a way with weaving meaningful words for description of a scene. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 7/2/2024 10:01:00 PM
Twilight is always so engrossing with its gleaming tints. Beautifully done. A great entry, dear Nette. Best of luck in the contest.
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