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Double Crossed

Immortality wandering through joyful bliss Angels ambient of warriors winged Cherubs smiling upon clouds white Creation dreaming thru fields green Children laughing amidst meadows ******************* ******************* Forever's flowering under blue skies Dancing demons within fiery hells Treasures found soon quickly arise Entrancing illusions waving spells Fountains spewing of love profound Seas bloody within fires burning Mountains peeking above ground Disease spreading while yearning Butterflies chasing rays of sunlight Satan standing with armies proud Sunrise warming landscapes bright Pagan hearts misleading surround Choirs angelic heavenly are singing Walls weeping with dormant eyes Fires building eyes of love blinking Halls howling within vivid disguise Holding hands with divine intention Darkness roaming of calling night Molding gods thoughts for invention Starkness of shadows in delight ++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++ Demonic seeds spreading in hate Creatures celebrating rising dead Pernicious smells filling open air Hellion holes falling within dust Souls enslaved, entombed & condemned. 'the words of God are breathed into our hearts and are exhaled thru our love' ...listen to your heart...anything else may be a falsehood... The constant struggle between true faith & religious dogma...amongs't heavens & hells... This poem consists of a mixture of free verse, double rhyme and a monoku at the end...all encased within, what I call a 360 double helix reversible...can be read backward and in reverse...double helix, because of the double rhyme at the ends...what else do you do with boredom lol Sept.13.2018 UNSHEATH YOUR SWORD Poetry Sponsored by: John Lawless N/A for contest

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Date: 9/15/2018 8:31:00 PM
So clever you are. I have tried to do complicated things but never one like this. It takes so much time and patience. Way to go, WW.
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:55:00 PM
Yes, indeed!! The battle is on. Darkness will always touch light, while light scatters darkness!! Powerful words Winged Warrior!! Once again, your creative mind is being very creative. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/14/2018 5:08:00 PM
The only true truth lies within the wells of our hearts. Only in silence can we co-exist with this divine revelation. I love your working of the spirit. You most definitely have unsheathe your sword, you got the edge dear poet, wonderful entry, gl
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Date: 9/14/2018 4:37:00 PM
A lot of thought went into this piece. Masterfully done!
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:37:00 PM
Nicely written, ^WW^, God is our breath. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:37:00 AM
Brilliant bro, you are a master writer:)
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:05:00 AM
This was so cool, took me on a journey through your mind that was not disappointing. What is real and what is not...Don't ask me, I'm just a poet. : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:15:00 AM
Some preachers give sermons that seem true, and take your money as well, but it may just be an illusion...Great write WW
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Date: 9/14/2018 6:21:00 AM
Brilliantly written WW. Amazing :)
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