Double Crossed

Immortality wandering through joyful bliss
   Angels ambient of warriors winged
   Cherubs smiling upon clouds white
  Creation dreaming thru fields green
   Children laughing amidst meadows
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 Forever's flowering under blue skies          Dancing demons within fiery hells
   Treasures found soon quickly arise          Entrancing illusions waving spells
  Fountains spewing of love profound          Seas bloody within fires burning
     Mountains peeking above ground          Disease spreading while yearning
   Butterflies chasing rays of sunlight          Satan standing with armies proud
  Sunrise warming landscapes bright          Pagan hearts misleading surround
  Choirs angelic heavenly are singing          Walls weeping with dormant eyes
   Fires building eyes of love blinking          Halls howling within vivid disguise
  Holding hands with divine intention          Darkness roaming of calling night
 Molding gods thoughts for invention          Starkness of shadows in delight
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                                                               Demonic seeds spreading in hate
                                                               Creatures celebrating rising dead
                                                               Pernicious smells filling open air
                                                               Hellion holes falling within dust
                                                     Souls enslaved, entombed & condemned.



'the words of God are breathed into our hearts and are exhaled thru our love'

...listen to your heart...anything else may be a falsehood...

The constant struggle between true faith & religious dogma...amongs't heavens & hells...


This poem consists of a mixture of free verse, double rhyme and a monoku at the end...all encased within, what I call a 360 double helix reversible...can be read backward and in reverse...double helix, because of the double rhyme at the ends...what else do you do with boredom lol



Sept.13.2018
UNSHEATH YOUR SWORD Poetry 
Sponsored by: John Lawless


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Date: 9/15/2018 8:31:00 PM
So clever you are. I have tried to do complicated things but never one like this. It takes so much time and patience. Way to go, WW.
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:55:00 PM
Yes, indeed!! The battle is on. Darkness will always touch light, while light scatters darkness!! Powerful words Winged Warrior!! Once again, your creative mind is being very creative. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/14/2018 5:08:00 PM
The only true truth lies within the wells of our hearts. Only in silence can we co-exist with this divine revelation. I love your working of the spirit. You most definitely have unsheathe your sword, you got the edge dear poet, wonderful entry, gl
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Date: 9/14/2018 4:37:00 PM
A lot of thought went into this piece. Masterfully done!
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:37:00 PM
Nicely written, ^WW^, God is our breath. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:37:00 AM
Brilliant bro, you are a master writer:)
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:05:00 AM
This was so cool, took me on a journey through your mind that was not disappointing. What is real and what is not...Don't ask me, I'm just a poet. : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:15:00 AM
Some preachers give sermons that seem true, and take your money as well, but it may just be an illusion...Great write WW
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Date: 9/14/2018 6:21:00 AM
Brilliantly written WW. Amazing :)
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