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Dotted Line

I wait for a sign standing in this valley my mind circling back to you visions that I see tall saguaros mountains surrounding warm sun blue sky me and you the path we walked side by side has weeds pushing up through the dotted lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2010 6:51:00 AM
Did she mean that?...Gosh I am shocked...Its poetry and its good I loved the imagery and the emotion BJ...keep writing ...Allie
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