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Dotage's Prey

leader king lion led and taught how to hunt prey becomes dotage's prey huge experience it holds others yet to learn old is gold all know

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Skat A

Date: 6/3/2015 10:17:00 PM

It's all a cycle

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 10:58:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 6/3/2015 1:27:00 PM

Very clever haiku - survival of the fittest sadly old age creeps up on us all:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 1:32:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Great haiku .... animal life and rules - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 1:33:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl