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Dotage's Prey 

leader king lion
                                 led and taught how to hunt prey
                                        becomes dotage's prey

                                           huge experience
                                    it holds others yet to learn
                                          old is gold all know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Skat A
Date: 6/3/2015 10:17:00 PM
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It's all a cycle
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 10:58:00 PM
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Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2015 1:27:00 PM
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Very clever haiku - survival of the fittest sadly old age creeps up on us all:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 1:32:00 PM
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Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2015 1:21:00 PM
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- Great haiku .... animal life and rules - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2015 1:33:00 PM
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Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

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