Dot To Dot

The dots guide me towards the path of my ancestry,
Along the ivory gold shores of West Africa,
The wind, 
a horse drawn carriage for the call of my ancestors,
Where the ‘i’s would be dotted across many kingdoms,
The colour of the dots embellished with gold leaf,
And the joins would flow like rivers in streams of gold

Then the hue transforms the dots from gold to bright red,
Where vast oceans transported humanity,
The red ink violently splashes onto the scene,
Reflecting countless dots of humanity,
Of generations lost on the Transatlantic route,
Too much red is spilt to join the dots

Then the dots journey to the Americas and West Indies,
Where the overflow of dots begin to rust,
And corroded joins bring up the image of shackles,
Captivity, sold into bondage, man, woman and child,
So difficult to join the dots on the freedom trail,
When the pen cannot reach Justice to dot the ‘i’

Now the colour of the dots turns green,
As smooth green lines are drawn, roots begin to sprout,
The creation of my family tree,
Names of my ancestors are seated above each line,
The joined dots form the image of their strong resilience,
And follows me across the vastness of my deep ancestral ocean



18/12/22

Dot to Dot Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

Form: Free Verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/30/2022 10:11:00 AM
WJ, this is very special. Your journey woven into flowing poetic lines marked by dots that make up each experience line ending in the sprouting of your family tree! Congratulations on your win. This is a very special poem. Blessings. Happy New Year!
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W J Clarke
Date: 12/30/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Sam for your very kind and encouraging comments. Congratulations on your very clever and creative write and win. Wishing you and your loved ones a blessed and happy New Year.
Date: 12/30/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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W J Clarke
Date: 12/30/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Beata. May God bless you, your family and loved ones in the forthcoming New Year.
Date: 12/22/2022 2:56:00 PM
I especially like verse 3 - emotions shown not spoken. Congratulations in 1st place in my contest, WJ!
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Date: 12/22/2022 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Your comments are very much appreciated. Have a lovely Christmas.
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