Dot To Dot

It seems strange now that I did not see
as I joined the dots one, two, and three.
Even through numbers four, five and six,
there was nothing I saw, nada, nix.
The pencil in hand soon did combine
a line between seven, eight, and nine;
then ten, eleven, twelve and thirteen
(past my age) and still, nothing was seen.
I skipped quickly from there to nineteen
yelled; I think it's a giant sardine.
Dad said no, son, you need to do more.
Slowly the line went past twenty-four,
so far, way past, now to forty-four.
The pencil went blunt, my fingers sore.
A big round circle to fifty-eight
I thought I saw it and said wait, wait!
No need to wait 'till hundred and ten
I saw what was there, a big fat hen!

I kept going past hundred and nine,
finished, coloured; it was mighty fine.




Dot to Dot Poetry Contest; placed 2nd
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues
Date written: 17th November 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/30/2022 10:14:00 AM
Just delightful Terry! Brought back happy memories of doing the dot to dot puzzles as a child! Congrats and high fives! Blessings! Happy New Year!
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/6/2023 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Sam; glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/22/2022 8:48:00 PM
A giant sardine! Excellent entry and congrats on your win!
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:09:00 AM
Thank you Hat
Date: 12/22/2022 2:59:00 PM
You stayed on task with your father, your guide. Impression, you learned more than is apparent. Congratulations on 2nd place in my contest, Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:10:00 AM
Thank you Kim, for the placement and for running the contest, it was a fun challenge.
Date: 12/14/2022 3:40:00 AM
Excellent dot to dot entry. I foresee a winner here. My grandchildren loved them and now that they've grown, I need to show them your poem. An early commendation for a fine rhyme.
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Date: 11/26/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thanks for showing me how it’s done, Terry. My own entry to this contest is in my mind for deletion… I can’t help thinking it’s abysmal. As soon as I come up with something better, it’s gone! I like this though, and trust it will do well. Good luck. Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/28/2022 1:41:00 AM
Thanks Terry, I really liked your entry, it should do well
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