Dorothea the Nun

veils escape the province of the sea like sea lions bouncing balls presenting their accoutrements. the silken fare, in the center of the square - everyone sees the princely dyes.
off to the side, a nun, on her knees tying shoes, wiping tears with her scapular, the forlorn child formless and empty, like the earth in the beginning, until God said, “Let there be light.” Dorothea, a gift of God, reveals that glory unseen, untouched by the ladies of the night. the child swaddled in the nun’s habit, like an embryo - she hears the mothering heartbeat — as if the ocean, clear as glass, showed off its icons broadway style. the child overwhelmed, has no name for the empirical pounding in her chest. Sister David they would call her in the penguin house, a woman after God’s heart, but Dorothea herself made the covenant.
the veils like clouds swirl all around in a seaside mist, the dustbowl urn, “ashes to ashes, dust to dust,” her mother’s breasts like a harbor to the seamen, so many of them — did her father arrive with the rest? she would never know,
but of this she did — this gift of God looked into her spindly eyes, made her habit a boat that sailed far far away to an island that would shine all day. children of the silken winds, battered by retreating shore found solace together, overrun by the habits of nuns, with hands that soothe and discipline, teach that the flipside of the beach has warmth and a perfect soulmate. Be she a fiddler, a thief, or kind — Dorothea has saved girls’ lives. 5/19/2020 NUN POETRY CONTEST Sponsor: Julia Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/23/2020 12:05:00 PM
Kim wonderful story line.Your creative talent will bring a first place finish. Thank you for posting.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2020 2:52:00 PM
Thanks, Michael!
Date: 5/20/2020 7:15:00 AM
WOW WOW… such a wonderful entry to that contest!!! I love it. It's such a story unfolding within poetry. SO detailed and creative. Love it. God bless you, dear friend, with love and prayers ~ Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Regina, and God bless you too!
Date: 5/19/2020 9:28:00 PM
This was written in heaven first, you must have dreamed it. Succulent and delightful my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2020 9:30:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/19/2020 12:24:00 PM
A fine read...very poetic style...Enjoyed it
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 5/19/2020 11:59:00 AM
A FAV instantaneously. I stand in great awe of your poetry. Honestly~ I have no idea how you create such poetic masterworks!! May you win first place! Panagiota xoxo
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Date: 5/19/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! :)
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