Dormant

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I have so many poems dormant within my psyche sitting waiting for a cull midst fizzing to the surface words circle above my head in iridescent bubbles dancing hovering in flight the songbird fledgings soaring seeing which take to the perch as I hold out pen or finger Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~IN THE GARDEN OF MY FANTASY~ 2023 AP: 2nd place 2023, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 1, 2019 for contest EARLY MARCH 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/5/2019 6:40:00 PM

they will land and whisper into your ear.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 6:42:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2019 1:20:00 PM

Oooh! This is wonderfully written. A FAVE for me (tinged with an itsy-bitsy tint of jealousy, I confess). Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/3/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thanks you for the lovely compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/1/2019 5:55:00 AM

You are truly blessed to have so many poems in your mind, lol, there are days when my mind is totally blank, like the day the great Titanic sank. Love your spirit beautiful lady, have a wonderful day, give us more of your delightful poetry. Amen ?

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and comment, Pixie. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/1/2019 3:56:00 AM

"dormant within my psyche" - I love it that you know this, for sometimes I do not. This poem is beautifully done, with clear imagery of thought.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 8:34:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Kevin Fairbrother

Date: 3/1/2019 2:54:00 AM

Know the feeling. Your verse says it all. Cheers Kev

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2019 3:16:00 AM

Thanks for the much appreciated visit and comment, Kevin.