Dormancy

Inactive as bears,
sleeping in a remote cave...
dreaming of grassland.



The theme of the poem is winter.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2010 at 6:28 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Andrew. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

June 20, 2010 at 9:49 PM

Nicely done as one can personify with the bears...Congrats on your win. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2010 at 5:18 PM

yes, a common thing in winter! congratulations with this nice one!!

June 19, 2010 at 1:47 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2010 at 9:13 PM

Congrats Andrew on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. and also appreciate your support of my endeavors on Soup and your constant prayers for my son.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2010 at 11:09 PM

very nice! Good luck in the contest and thanks for seeing my blog. I too love dark chocolate as I left in my blog note to you. LUv, Andrea

June 12, 2010 at 6:38 PM

You have me smiling with this view. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

C.C Bloomsfield

June 12, 2010 at 7:52 AM

love it,especially the last verse,grassland is their freedom!Celene!

Constance La France

June 12, 2010 at 7:18 AM

Did you ever hear of the book, Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus, well anyways, it states, that when men want to be alone, they go into deep caves, and us women go into wells... and never, ever, try to get the bear, I mean, the man out of his cave, until he is ready... loved your poem.. constance