Dormancy

Inactive as bears, sleeping in a remote cave... dreaming of grassland. The theme of the poem is winter.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Andrew. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:49:00 PM

Nicely done as one can personify with the bears...Congrats on your win. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:18:00 PM

yes, a common thing in winter! congratulations with this nice one!!

Date: 6/19/2010 1:47:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:13:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. and also appreciate your support of my endeavors on Soup and your constant prayers for my son.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 11:09:00 PM

very nice! Good luck in the contest and thanks for seeing my blog. I too love dark chocolate as I left in my blog note to you. LUv, Andrea

Date: 6/12/2010 6:38:00 PM

You have me smiling with this view. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/12/2010 7:52:00 AM

love it,especially the last verse,grassland is their freedom!Celene!

Constance La France

Date: 6/12/2010 7:18:00 AM

Did you ever hear of the book, Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus, well anyways, it states, that when men want to be alone, they go into deep caves, and us women go into wells... and never, ever, try to get the bear, I mean, the man out of his cave, until he is ready... loved your poem.. constance

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2010 3:12:00 AM

A nice thought well expressed with apt images