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Doppelganger - Contest

In the darkness she lies still, Her closed eyes do feel my stare Each breath she takes fills my lungs Her thoughts, our minds, run Her fears flood right through my veins She twitches and turns for me She is me and I am her Our hearts beat as one 02-12-2015

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2020 9:17:00 AM

goosebumps here!....*vinks, jamez

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2018 9:45:00 AM

Interesting work. I have to look up Doppelganger each time for I can't remember what it is..LOL..I am sure it is a good contender in the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Julie Clark

Date: 1/30/2016 7:22:00 AM

another interesting poem you are very deep

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/23/2015 12:40:00 PM

Wow, yet another great write, I just cannot get enough! Wonderful! Powerful! Keep on writing my mockingbird! Love, The Blue Poet xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2015 5:56:00 PM

I think you did a fine job with this one. Yours is a lot like mine, actually (if I ever get ready to post mine!) I think it is one of the better ones I have seen.

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I am not 100% happy with it - i feel like i could give it more. although, the frustration may just help my next poem to be my best one!

Beryl Johnson

Date: 12/1/2015 8:47:00 PM

She is me and I am her - I love this!

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 1:42:00 AM

Thanks Beryl, look forward to reading your work!