Doppelganger - Contest

In the darkness she lies still, 
Her closed eyes do feel my stare
Each breath she takes fills my lungs
Her thoughts, our minds, run

Her fears flood right through my veins
She twitches and turns for me
She is me and I am her
Our hearts beat as one

02-12-2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/13/2020 9:17:00 AM
goosebumps here!....*vinks, jamez
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:45:00 AM
Interesting work. I have to look up Doppelganger each time for I can't remember what it is..LOL..I am sure it is a good contender in the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:22:00 AM
another interesting poem you are very deep
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Date: 12/23/2015 12:40:00 PM
Wow, yet another great write, I just cannot get enough! Wonderful! Powerful! Keep on writing my mockingbird! Love, The Blue Poet xoxo
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Date: 12/2/2015 5:56:00 PM
I think you did a fine job with this one. Yours is a lot like mine, actually (if I ever get ready to post mine!) I think it is one of the better ones I have seen.
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Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I am not 100% happy with it - i feel like i could give it more. although, the frustration may just help my next poem to be my best one!
Date: 12/1/2015 8:47:00 PM
She is me and I am her - I love this!
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Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/2/2015 1:42:00 AM
Thanks Beryl, look forward to reading your work!
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