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Doorway Six - Disturbing Scifi

“F”, we’ll call him Felipe Felipe found a doorway he didn’t mean to he wasn’t looking for it and at first he wasn’t aware he’d gone through it but something was off shades of familiarity were centred off-centre ripples among ripples enticingly chiselled casting a darkness slyly across shadows against a background veil but where Felipe was now an intrigue kept him, lured for now one of the numbers he had found a world in a world that found him “F”, we’ve called him Felipe is still watching you but from nearer, afar

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Date: 12/12/2023 4:30:00 PM
I see Tom's point...your poem seems like something with hidden mystery and meaning ala Twilight Zone. Felipe lured and has become one of the 'numbers'...isn't that you and I, lured into the illusionary world...just some passing thoughts. I appreciate the thought-provoking nature of your poems. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/13/2023 8:15:00 AM
I'm really intrigued as to where the many thousands of missing people go each year, after the usual reasons it still leaves a large percentage completely unnacounted for, difficult in a digital age, so my guess was portals to wherever. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts Sara
Date: 12/12/2023 4:06:00 PM
Twilight Zonish
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/13/2023 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for reading Tom

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