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Doors

Doors open and doors close                                                                     
Often we cannot get through and it shows  
Others just go around like it was their toes                               
Running hard may break it down-there it goes                                             
She said open up a window and be lead out by your nose


Date Written: 7/22/2021
Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/1/2021 11:40:00 AM I love your amusing Acrostic Rhyme Paula, especially that last line… Belle Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2021 2:00:00 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this amusing Acrostic Rhyme write. I enjoy making people laugh/smile. Hope I put a smile on your face. Have a blessed day with a smile....................

Ann Foster Date: 7/28/2021 7:41:00 AM Well written. Ann Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2021 11:14:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. It was a write. Have a blessed day....................

Harry Horsman Date: 7/26/2021 6:40:00 PM Well done, Paula, love the form, and the poetry. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2021 11:12:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this Acrostic Rhyme write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/26/2021 11:21:00 AM Your marvelous entry seems destined for a win, Paula. I very much enjoyed this delightful verse. Evelyn :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2021 11:11:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you enjoyed this "Doors" write. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day....................

Beata Agustin Date: 7/26/2021 6:11:00 AM Thanks for sharing these bits of reality in your awesome poetic style ... even combining two forms. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2021 11:08:00 AM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Hope I made you "Smile." Have a blessed day....................

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/25/2021 11:23:00 PM Great observations on doors, ending with a funny note. Best for a win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2021 11:06:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this funny one. I like to make funny. "Smile" Have a blessed day....................

Joseph May Date: 7/25/2021 7:10:00 AM Sometimes we have break them down, Nicely penned Paula Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/25/2021 8:57:00 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, you are so right. "Sometimes we have break them down." Have a blessed day....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/24/2021 7:45:00 AM Dear Paula, I find a profound note in the first two lines. Often we can not get through the doors - when others just go around it! Love and blessings, Dear Friend - keep enriching us with your poetry. Love and blessings ~ Mala Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/24/2021 8:02:00 AM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this Doors write. Have a blessed day/weekend....................

Supraja Kannan Date: 7/23/2021 3:02:00 AM That's so interesting!!! Great theme for the contest... Good luck in the contest... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/23/2021 9:55:00 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day....................

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/22/2021 9:05:00 PM Thanks for the laugh. Good one! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/23/2021 9:47:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad I could give you laugh here. Have a blessed day....................

Robert Pettit Date: 7/22/2021 8:14:00 PM Cute little poem. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/23/2021 9:46:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad to see you here. Have a blessed day....................

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/22/2021 4:12:00 PM Hello Paula, i gotqa chuckle out of this poem. thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/23/2021 11:31:00 AM Hello Paula, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/23/2021 9:42:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad I gave you a chuckle. Have a blessed day....................

Jan Allison Date: 7/22/2021 3:27:00 PM Fabulous rhyming acrostic Paula:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/23/2021 9:28:00 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this rhyming acrostic. Have a blessed day with hugs.................