Doors

Doors open and doors close Often we cannot get through and it shows Others just go around like it was their toes Running hard may break it down-there it goes She said open up a window and be lead out by your nose Date Written: 7/22/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/1/2021 11:40:00 AM

I love your amusing Acrostic Rhyme Paula, especially that last line… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2021 2:00:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this amusing Acrostic Rhyme write. I enjoy making people laugh/smile. Hope I put a smile on your face. Have a blessed day with a smile....................

Ann Foster

Date: 7/28/2021 7:41:00 AM

Well written. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:14:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. It was a write. Have a blessed day....................

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2021 6:40:00 PM

Well done, Paula, love the form, and the poetry.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you love this Acrostic Rhyme write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/26/2021 11:21:00 AM

Your marvelous entry seems destined for a win, Paula. I very much enjoyed this delightful verse. Evelyn :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:11:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you enjoyed this "Doors" write. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day....................

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/26/2021 6:11:00 AM

Thanks for sharing these bits of reality in your awesome poetic style ... even combining two forms. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Hope I made you "Smile." Have a blessed day....................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/25/2021 11:23:00 PM

Great observations on doors, ending with a funny note. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this funny one. I like to make funny. "Smile" Have a blessed day....................

Joseph May

Date: 7/25/2021 7:10:00 AM

Sometimes we have break them down, Nicely penned Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2021 8:57:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, you are so right. "Sometimes we have break them down." Have a blessed day....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/24/2021 7:45:00 AM

Dear Paula, I find a profound note in the first two lines. Often we can not get through the doors - when others just go around it! Love and blessings, Dear Friend - keep enriching us with your poetry. Love and blessings ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/24/2021 8:02:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this Doors write. Have a blessed day/weekend....................

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/23/2021 3:02:00 AM

That's so interesting!!! Great theme for the contest... Good luck in the contest...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:55:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day....................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/22/2021 9:05:00 PM

Thanks for the laugh. Good one!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad I could give you laugh here. Have a blessed day....................

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/22/2021 8:14:00 PM

Cute little poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad to see you here. Have a blessed day....................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/22/2021 4:12:00 PM

Hello Paula, i gotqa chuckle out of this poem. thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hello Paula, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad I gave you a chuckle. Have a blessed day....................

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2021 3:27:00 PM

Fabulous rhyming acrostic Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2021 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this rhyming acrostic. Have a blessed day with hugs.................