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Doodles - Nursery Rhyme

Our Doodles is a silly hound, who if he hears a laughing sound, in circles will go round and round! His weird behavior can confound. One time we put food on the ground; he sniffed and he sniffed all around. That dog food STILL he never found. Then at the lake he nearly drowned. We can't return him to the pound. "One Dumb Dog" our Doodles is crowned. April 24, 2022 for Ever Roper's Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/5/2022 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your fun nursery rhyme and your win. Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 5/4/2022 11:21:00 AM
Very cute. Congrats on your top win. I'm wondering if the name of your dog Snickers determined your fictional name Doodles (Snickerdoodles)? BTW, so sorry to hear about Snickers passing away. Hope you're doing well, Tinkerbell ~ John
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Date: 5/3/2022 5:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/3/2022 9:14:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 5/3/2022 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/2/2022 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful nursery rhyme and your win my dear friend, Andrea! Thanks for sharing. I love the story. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 5/2/2022 7:08:00 PM
Great story, Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessing my friend
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Date: 4/29/2022 5:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed your “ nursery rhyme” poem. Doodles sound like one interesting dog. Good content and rhymes. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend. PS, how was your Easter? :-) Alexis
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Date: 4/28/2022 2:33:00 AM
This has a jazzy feeling like a nursery rhyme should!
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Date: 4/25/2022 3:08:00 PM
My wife would say, that I and Doodles have a lot in common -- so far she has not returned me. Who want's smart anyway?~would rather having loving. Best of luck with contest!
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Date: 4/25/2022 2:26:00 PM
Oh, wow!!! This is awesome. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:00:00 PM
This is too cute Andrea. Our dogs accept and love us as we are and we should do no less for them. Good stuff and belongs in a children's book. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/25/2022 11:53:00 AM
Video-tape! AFV awarded $100,000 to a couple who videotaped their dogs growling at each other (I did not find that funny at all, but $100,000 for that video was certainly most peculiar!). Aloha!
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Date: 4/25/2022 11:05:00 AM
Doodles sounds adorable - love him and enjoy him! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/25/2022 5:43:00 AM
Your love shows in these words. A lovely write--apt for the theme.
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Date: 4/25/2022 5:02:00 AM
Dogs do have peculiar habits. The run around fit is always interesting. Fun nursry rhyme.
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Date: 4/25/2022 1:06:00 AM
It takes me to the golden days of my childhood dear Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Splendid
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Date: 4/25/2022 12:34:00 AM
Kids love to rhyme. It is usually their introduction to poetry. I love knowing we can create that for them. Very cute Andrea. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/24/2022 10:26:00 PM
A fine nursery rhyme, written i in simple works but portrays character. Laughing made him happy, It would have been a pity had he drowned. Hugs.
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