Doodles - Nursery Rhyme

Our Doodles is a silly hound,
who if he hears a laughing sound,
in circles will go round and round!
His weird behavior can confound.

One time we put food on the ground;
he sniffed and he sniffed all around.
That dog food STILL he never found.
Then at the lake he nearly drowned.

We can't return him to the pound.
"One Dumb Dog" our Doodles is crowned.

April 24, 2022
for Ever Roper's Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/5/2022 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your fun nursery rhyme and your win. Have a blessed day...........
Login to Reply
Date: 5/4/2022 11:21:00 AM
Very cute. Congrats on your top win. I'm wondering if the name of your dog Snickers determined your fictional name Doodles (Snickerdoodles)? BTW, so sorry to hear about Snickers passing away. Hope you're doing well, Tinkerbell ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2022 5:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2022 9:14:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your top win!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2022 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2022 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful nursery rhyme and your win my dear friend, Andrea! Thanks for sharing. I love the story. God bless you always. Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/2/2022 7:08:00 PM
Great story, Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessing my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2022 5:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed your “ nursery rhyme” poem. Doodles sound like one interesting dog. Good content and rhymes. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend. PS, how was your Easter? :-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2022 2:33:00 AM
This has a jazzy feeling like a nursery rhyme should!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 3:08:00 PM
My wife would say, that I and Doodles have a lot in common -- so far she has not returned me. Who want's smart anyway?~would rather having loving. Best of luck with contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 2:26:00 PM
Oh, wow!!! This is awesome. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 12:00:00 PM
This is too cute Andrea. Our dogs accept and love us as we are and we should do no less for them. Good stuff and belongs in a children's book. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 11:53:00 AM
Video-tape! AFV awarded $100,000 to a couple who videotaped their dogs growling at each other (I did not find that funny at all, but $100,000 for that video was certainly most peculiar!). Aloha!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 11:05:00 AM
Doodles sounds adorable - love him and enjoy him! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 5:43:00 AM
Your love shows in these words. A lovely write--apt for the theme.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 5:02:00 AM
Dogs do have peculiar habits. The run around fit is always interesting. Fun nursry rhyme.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 1:06:00 AM
It takes me to the golden days of my childhood dear Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Splendid
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2022 12:34:00 AM
Kids love to rhyme. It is usually their introduction to poetry. I love knowing we can create that for them. Very cute Andrea. Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2022 10:26:00 PM
A fine nursery rhyme, written i in simple works but portrays character. Laughing made him happy, It would have been a pity had he drowned. Hugs.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter