Don'T You... Get the Point?!

Yes, the rhino is leather that rumbles
and deadly to a hunter who fumbles,
Now secure in the zoo,
Still, it might behoove you
not to show your backside if you stumble.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on your success, Gerard. I knew this would be a winner. The limerick is a great form for you! Love, Carolyn
White Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 3:01 AM
HAHA you nut- this is a classic
Cwiak Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 10:10 PM
I get the point! Congrats on your win! Dan C
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Congrats on the win
Culverhouse Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 6:21 PM
funny ---I like it, I can't decide which to choose for the best...Linda will have to do the dirty.
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 4:45 PM
That would be a very painful or deadly point to get...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Fraser Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Ouchy if hit by its horn, cool Limerick Gerard. Congratualtions on your win in the contest >> James
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May 8, 2010 at 6:13 PM
You have me smiling with your humor. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Dufresne Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 5:49 PM
had to come back and read it again..Gerard. really liked your wording in this one. very very well done! don't know why it's not higher on the list.Great job.- Robert
Dufresne Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 5:45 PM
excellent advice Gerard and congrats to you! Robert
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 5:33 PM
great title, too!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 5:32 PM
I would say this one deserved a higher ranking. It has got the limerick meter as well as a catchy story. congratulations. Andrea
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May 8, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Congrats on your success in my zoo contest Gerard.. with this funny rhino Limerick.. thankxxx for supporting my contests.. and soon I will be having a sports contests for us sports crazed fans.. keep watching... thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie
Roberts Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 9:59 AM
very cute
Devonshire Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 9:34 AM
What can I say, Gerard. You are a master of the limerick form and the humor is always a standout. I feel sure you will do very well in the contest. Great writing once again! Love, Carolyn
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May 8, 2010 at 9:34 AM
smiles to your entry, enjoyed with a smile,..p.d
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