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Don'T You Cry Tonight

~ "Give me a whisper and give me a sigh" Those soft words following the emotions in your eyes exhale poetry on my whimpered dreams Take from me all that I can give while reaching for that sunset…a distant prism of light "Give me a kiss before you, tell me goodbye" Soft lips in sad shapes, downturned towards darkened fears, moist as they meet in wilted wishes Walking away…a silhouette of that which I long for as tears drift on silent zephyrs "Don't you take it so hard now and please don't take it so bad" To know this feeling, I swear I don’t, still calling out in echoed chants flowing naked valleys Hoping you hear, praying you smile, asking you to listen before the moon fractures in cosmic sorrow "I'll still be thinkin' of you and the times we had...baby" Eternal visions find you and me, hand in hand, dancing on quiet shores, melodic surf rhythms In memories of what can be, should be as stars drip into anguished teacups pleading "Don’t you cry tonight…" Written with a little help from the Guns n Roses song, “Don’t Cry” The italicized lines are lyrics from their song This song came on the radio today and it reminded me I had written this poem. I thought it would be appropriate for today…this is a repost John Hamilton and Heidi Sands may recognize this but hopefully it is new to you. I hope you enjoy it.

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Date: 12/17/2019 7:45:00 AM
I love this use of intertextuality, beautifully done, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Roxane. I'm a big GnR fan and often use their lyrics as inspiration for poetry. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 11/15/2019 8:51:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 11/14/2019 1:26:00 PM
As stars drip into anguished teacups pleading-Sigh.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/14/2019 1:35:00 PM
My intention is to stay .I'm getting hooked up in the busy life...and getting sleepy earlier than I used to..but am doing my best.I love being here.Have a nice evening :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 1:32:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one Charmaine. Thank you again. I hope you are planning on sticking around for a while
Date: 11/14/2019 10:16:00 AM
Yes, this feels familiar to me Chris. Especially the stanza 'after' ....Give me a kiss before you tell me goodbye. Thanks for sharing with us Chris. Your writing is powerful and so many enjoy it :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 10:33:00 AM
You and John were two of the four who commented on this when I first posted so I was hoping you would remember it. Thank you so much Heidi. You are always so kind to me
Date: 11/14/2019 12:21:00 AM
This is lyrical and reads like a well-penned love song, Chris. Beautiful! Bravo!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Caren, so very much.
Date: 11/13/2019 11:06:00 PM
Very well-done and very emotional piece here ~ excellent use of the song lyrics and mood, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thank you again HT for your kind words on my poem. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 11/13/2019 6:03:00 PM
Yeah yeah, I was reading it and said I think this is a re-post, yes I remember this, even better than I remember, I guess like fine wine....
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 AM
I knew you'd remember this one because of it's musical connection. Thanks my friend.
Date: 11/13/2019 5:26:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Line
Date: 11/13/2019 5:14:00 PM
Hi Chris I thought this was G&R. nicely done. Thanks for sharing. I like how you visualize your words.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:05:00 AM
Thanks so very much Greg. I am thrilled you liked this one. GnR is one of my faves.
Date: 11/13/2019 5:09:00 PM
sigh, so beautiful this is my friend ....glad you shared it for those of us who were not around so we could enjoy this gorgeous poem ... goodnight Chris :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2019 7:04:00 AM
I am thrilled you liked this one Sandy. You are so very kind to me. Glad you found this repost, not many saw it the last time around so I thought I'd share it again.

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