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Whoever blushes is already guilty; true innocence is ashamed of nothing.

Jean-Jacque Rousseau

DONt WORRY LOVE

Don’t Worry Love

The hot redness of her face, as if Mars,
     Surrounded by flashy yellow a-bright;
And pure snow clouds dancing, chastefully, light.
     Orbit’s blush and puppy love eyes with stars.
Latterly, bestie speaks it out loudly.
     A sudden volcanic moon of madness
dries her throat, a disruption of sadness.
     Virginal countenance, burning brightly.
Then her crush softly grabs her hand in his.
     “Don’t worry love. Let’s step outside,” he croons.
She is startled - her cheeks begin to swoon.
     Fresh air cools her down. She enjoys the chills.
The robins sings of lovely things - knees weak,
     as he brushes a kiss upon her cheek.
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George Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 5:39 AM
"The robins sings of lovely things - knees weak, as he brushes a kiss upon her cheek." As the loved one plants a kiss, robins sing at the backdrop. Lovely ambience. A very romantic poem. I can imagine knees going weak, especially when it is a first time experience.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Thank you, Valsa! The first time you experience such lovely things! Hugs ~ Kim
Rolland Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 5:41 PM
so lovely and romantic, as we say infrench, il n'y a pas d'amour, que des preuves d'amour, merci beaucoup pour ce délicieux poème
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Merci beaucoup, Yann! Je souris :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Ahh!!! I like the romantic lines penned. Way to go. I don't think I have seen this form used before. I will have to look it up. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 2:11 PM
I don’t remember seeing so I am now in love with it…gives a sonnet a little elbow room :)
Hind Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:10 AM
What imagery- all of it is beautiful, different. You're a true poetess with a true gift, I am privileged to read.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:36 AM
I am so appreciative of your encouragement, dear Poetess!
Romios Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:10 AM
This is soooo neautuful. Youy are a master of imagery and cab express human ention with dekucaby and unique phrases. Amazing how your words are like a paint brush. One can feel the loving interactions in the poem., thanks to your artistry. Pangie xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:22 AM
I appreciate you, Pangie! Feeling encouraged!
One Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 7:58 AM
It is great to see you trying different forms, I have not done this one.. I liked the rhymes in this one.. Flows really well..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:25 AM
I love that I found this form! It gives the room to write a free-er sonnet! Thank you so much. Nice, that with a hybronnet you can do some slant rhymes. There are some words that have only one or no true rhymes. Hugs ~ Kim (Thank you for the encouragement!)
Lane Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 7:53 AM
Oh, what a sigh escapes from me after reading this one, Kim. Love it and your new photo. Are those Mardi Gras beads around your necks? You know I'm in New Orleans, right?
Lane Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Great, Kim. It would be wonderful to meet you here.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much, dear Lin! We weren’t in New Orleans but we were at a party. My sis is doing her 60th in New Orleans. I cannot come but if I do for some reason, I will let you know!! My grands most likely are coming to visit. Priorities.
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