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Don'T Worry It's Okay

There I go again Dropping the ball Hoping, praying it will bounce back into awkward hands I stumble upon my rubbered legs Falling beyond athletic aspirations Never much for teamworks disappointments I listen as the opposition cheers One step closer to their dreams My shoulders slumped Inside my head I want to scream I was never part of this team My frustration erupts from my eyes Nothing but disdain from bigger guys I drop my glove, head off the field Perhaps some distance will be a shield Then one guy walks over to me He says, "dont worry it's okay. They're just a bunch of jerks anyway. With more practice you'll learn to play, we can get together another day." With that he gives me a smile I say "I'll be okay in a while" He is cool and now my friend At least I hope it's not pretend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2013 8:12:00 PM
Hi, Rick! Sorry for having been away so long. I am fine but connexionsare horrible! Happy to see you as prolific and inspiring as always! Good old Rick! A trustworthy and solid friend too! Coming up now and then to heal my soul(^_^)Hugs, Hanitra
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:31:00 PM
Being petite I was also last one chosen for teams....your heartfelt write shows that the pretenders were weeded out and you were blessed with true friends. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia!
Date: 9/6/2013 7:09:00 AM
It really is, you know....OK, I mean! :) Love that guy who made you feel good about yourself. Bless his soul! :) Imaginary or not!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:24:00 PM
I wasn't allowed to play on any teams and when we played in Gym Class I was close to the last to be chosen. As an adult I love playing sports and am fortunate to be co- ordinated. I am competitive so I enjoy the thrill of playing. I 'm kinda like a big kid.
Date: 9/6/2013 6:49:00 AM
Good poem, Richard. Are there two meanings to this? I'm not sure , but it seems like there is....maybe something on a spiritual level? Either way, it also makes me think of coaching little league baseball...Confidence and support is so important. My favorite part about it was showing them that they COULD do it. I always enjoy your work, Richard, and I thank you for your inspiring comments.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Caleb, and the answer is yes, there are more than just one meaning.
Date: 9/5/2013 8:00:00 PM
I understand these lines quite well. No room for the pretenders. Excellent job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:27:00 PM
I meant Drake. My spell corrector doesn't seem to like your real name for some reason.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 5:26:00 PM
You got that right Jake
Date: 9/5/2013 5:07:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Friendship made in heaven..Enjoyed reading about team spirit..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 9/5/2013 5:01:00 PM
Hi Richard well crafted and thought out well done great poem ty Shadow x smile
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.

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