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Don'T Tell Me What To Do -Angie's Rap Song-

1st Verse- Why can't I do things the way I wish and you do the same this cigarette ration is making my stomach squish I'm not just some dame We both used to smoke back when but you quit you never got headaches then this I do spit Chorus- I don't tell you what to do don't tell me what to do we both should wear the pants seize the ants 2nd Verse- When you're driving me places I fear for my life when you pull into parking spaces I'm beneath the knife I don't complain why would you put me through this prop this is pain you need to stop Chorus- I don't tell you what to do don't tell me what to do we both should wear the pants seize the ants 3rd Verse- You rot out my brain with the TV set I sit quietly while you watch I'm sweet we used to crank up the music instead Corona Virus would've been obsolete I wouldn't have even known there was one because we never watched the news unless somebody told me son now I feel the bruise Chorus- I don't tell you what to do don't tell me what to do we both should wear the pants seize the ants

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Date: 11/8/2020 11:37:00 AM
Nice one Angela..."Seize the Ants" Are you into songwriting?
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/8/2020 4:04:00 PM
I was a songwriter years ago. I wrote and did demo's for several music stars in Nashville. I quit that and started writing poetry. Recently, started writing a little bit on the music side again. This Rap was just something to have fun with. Thank you for asking :)
Date: 11/5/2020 5:34:00 AM
You deliver your message well Angela in this song. I hear the beat!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I'm glad you can hear it ;)
Date: 11/5/2020 5:30:00 AM
This is awesome:)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Date: 11/5/2020 4:09:00 AM
Very nice rap Angela...best wishes
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
Date: 11/5/2020 3:04:00 AM
Keep on rapping...and always do what you believe to be right! :) Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Doing what I believe to be right is easier said than done ;)
Date: 11/5/2020 2:05:00 AM
Love your rap!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One :)
Date: 11/5/2020 12:34:00 AM
A singular song worthy of the rap movement. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/5/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Just having some fun :)

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