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Don'T Tell Me Time Heals

her world fragmented full of emptiness full of pain the love of her life she may never see again how can she survive he's no longer alive unable to sleep unable to eat oh what is the point their life her and him that life is now over for now it's just her and there is no him... ~~~ she''s inside a bubble of grief and of tears unable to breath unable to speak she just wants to be with her soulmate her love she prays she will die in her sleep just like him each day she wakes her heart almost breaks ‘time will heal’ folk will tell her ‘don’t they know how she feels ’ and for them she prays that they never will ~~~ her love her soulmate for her he will wait until it’s her time when their souls join as one ever more to entwine as gently they soar together forever through heaven’s sweet door Written 23 March 2021 knowing the pain that my dear friend is going through and wishing I could take it away... Contest All Yours ( Mar 24) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/25/2021 10:12:00 AM

Ann, your compassionate heart is on full view here - compassion born out of your experience. Sending up prayers for your friend while you remain in my prayers. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:28:00 PM

Awww dear Sam your words always lift my spirit and I thank you so much for your prayers and blessings my sweet friend. With kindest thoughts nn xx

Carol Mitra

Date: 3/24/2021 6:31:00 PM

Such a heart felt moving poem....much love and hugs Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:26:00 PM

Than you dear Carol, with kindest thoughts from Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2021 5:41:00 PM

So poignant, Ann ~ beautifully penned. Wow ~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:26:00 PM

Thank you dearest Line. With love to you my friend from Ann xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/24/2021 1:15:00 PM

Sad, but well written. The emotions of grief are vividly portrayed. Congrats on your win, Ann! Blessings, Kim M

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim for your lovely words and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/23/2021 4:59:00 AM

So sad to hear about your friend Ann, grief is one of the hardest things we all have to deal with. I hope that you are okay. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/24/2021 9:12:00 AM

Thank you dear Tom, to watch and to know what pain she is going through is so hard, as I know only too well. I am here for her but grief is a lonely journey... I hope all is well with you my friend. I am struggling at times, but once I get into my PS zone, I feel so much better... With kindest thoughts Ann xx