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Sometimes the more you are willing to do the more some people will expect of you. It's important not to spread yourself too thin tryng to help others. Remember: Never milk the cow until she is dry, don't kill the goose that lays golden eggs and don't run the horse until he drops..

Don'T Spread Yourself Too Thin

A little old lady named Judy,
Felt strongly that it was her duty,
To cook, clean and garden,
Walk the dog and then drive on,
To town where she was needed truly.

Seemed there always was more to do,
And her husband said he needed her too.
Make his meals, mend his socks,
Rub his back, trim his locks,
In her spare time could she shine his shoes.

Judy was getting gray hair.
And finally said she didn't care.
Said she'd do what she could,
It must be understood,
He expected too much it ain't fair.

Getting ready for work one night,
She reached out to turn on the light,
When to her despair,
Tripped and fell down the stair.
Broke her hip as she fell down the flight.

It took her some time to mend,
And without her things just didn't blend.
The chores seemed to pile up,
While the lady was laid up.
They took care of themselves in the end.

Now first she cares for herself.
If there's time she will gladly lend help.
To all things there's a limit,
And there's just no good in it,
To put too much ahead of yourself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 6/2/2022 7:59:00 PM
hmmm, did hubbie ever pitch in and do something when she got laid up?? It really irritates me how mine does hardly a thing. REally enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:17:00 AM
I hope this is not true for you. I hope you did not break a hip. We can only do so much as we age, and the rest has to go undone unless someone pitches in or we hire help. Right now, it is going undone at my house. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/26/2022 6:20:00 AM
Great write Judy….it’s true you have to take of you first….breaking your hip is a harsh way to learn that though! Love this poem….Debx
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/29/2022 8:35:00 PM
Thanks you so much Deb. God Bless, JB
Date: 5/25/2022 10:04:00 PM
I forgot how many people I helped in my life. Now I'm long retired and I have no friends.
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/29/2022 10:24:00 PM
Not so Victor. I have long considered you a good friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 5/25/2022 6:54:00 PM
Aw, this is soooo true, Judy. Makes good sense. Yes, we should help others, but when we must do so at the expense of our own health and well-being. Well, then it is NOT good! Thanks for writing and sharing this one, JB.
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Judy Ball
Date: 5/29/2022 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Milton. God Bless, JB
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