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Don't set me free and then cry for me I'm your precious dove; think before Springing me from the cage, lest you feel the debilitating sting of regret. Don't set me free and then cry for me I am but a gust of wind that blows only in one direction, my darling You're behind me, not in front. Don't set me free and then cry for me To do so is to give me wings to fly to the ends of the earth, so far out of sight you'll never again reach me. Don't set me free and then cry for me Make your decision wisely, for before you blow a kiss goodbye, I've already crossed a rubicon of no return. I mean this in earnest, do not set me free; don't ever release me. If you do, I'll vanish for all eternity. You see, I am time itself. I couldn't sit idle and wait for you if I tried. Submitted for... Strand Select 5 Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/06/2020 N-A rerun 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton (Winner: 3rd Place) Date Submitted: 09/25/2019 Write the Poem You Have Always Wanted to Write Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger (N/A) Date written and submitted: 09/03/2019

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Date: 1/7/2020 9:55:00 PM
Excellent write! Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Sir Edward - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/8/2020 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gregory:-) Coming from such a great poet, that means a great deal! Happy New Year and blessings to you, too!
Date: 9/30/2019 7:12:00 PM
Edward, a deep and thought provoking poem so beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/30/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan:-)
Date: 9/28/2019 1:02:00 PM
Way to go Edward, congrats.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/28/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Richard:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2019 7:35:00 PM
Very nice congrats on a fine win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2019 9:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for placing me, John!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 9/4/2019 6:19:00 AM
What a ln insightful poem!! Not just the voice of the dove, it served me with quite a lot of other voices too :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/4/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Swetha:-) I'm glad this poem resonated with you!

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