Don'T Quit Your Daydream

With the push of the yellow rays,
The long and lone river runs in a bedlam
Of inaudible thoughts and sings
In despondence of her plight,
The thousand sightings of the thousand pebbles,
The Daffodils greet her with a smile,
Perhaps the only joy left in this vicious cycle,
She wonders under the soft moon light,
As her eyes glow with the stars,
Stars that may have been rivers like her
That dared to fly to the distant space,
Free from any bonds,
To flow in the endless nebula
And now live there as stars,
Adorned with thousand colours,
Calling her to join them, to dare.

Contest Name - Don't Quit Your Daydream
Date - 17th November, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/11/2022 4:36:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 12/10/2022 9:00:00 AM
Your poem is lovely. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/10/2022 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You penned a beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/10/2022 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Date: 12/4/2022 10:04:00 AM
I like the beauty of nature and the uplifting message in your poem, best wishes for the contest~
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