Dont Push Red Roses Aside

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Don’t push red roses aside
nor the violets-blue guide.

It’s childhood honey sweet.
It’s a record player on repeat.

It’s a treasure, and when found
a mother feels thus crowned.

The message on printed cards -
cute drawings with regards.

It is the simplest compliment -
in latter years, a sacred document.

It’s the breeziest way a child conveys
their love on special holidays.

5/17/2023

Here is one with spelling mistakes…love it:

short poem
      roses   are     red   voilets
are    blue    you   care
about  me    and   I   care
about    you.   xxxx   Looking
at    the  roses   blum    make
me    smile.

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Date: 5/21/2023 5:52:00 AM
Children express their love through small hand made cards and designs on special occasions. I remember having receieved a card once with a clumsily drawn picture with the words ... "Mom I lav you" from my four year old son.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2023 6:09:00 AM
I lav that ;) Thank you. You are a special lady! :)
Date: 5/20/2023 7:18:00 AM
Nice poem. Roses are treasures, and when saved over the years, sacred.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Date: 5/17/2023 11:44:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL! Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2023 6:04:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anisha! :)
Date: 5/17/2023 11:07:00 PM
Who would discard such beautiful flowers? Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2023 6:03:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/17/2023 2:19:00 PM
- Agree they are a sacred document, Kim - Lovely poem :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 5/17/2023 11:07:00 AM
Hello Kim. this is lovely. I will make it my fav. I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2023 3:32:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh you are welcome. These cards and letters would make you smile. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2023 12:38:00 PM
And you too! Thank you! Glad you liked this one! I came across some letters and cards today which made me smile :)
Date: 5/17/2023 10:02:00 AM
That's adorable, Kim. I'm writing paragraphs with mistakes purposefully made as practice for children to catch mistakes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2023 10:53:00 AM
That’s cool! Never thought to do that!
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