Don'T Look the Children In the Eyes

because I  was a child I had my eyes above 
I saw too clearly beyond clouds 
then the rain came down 
and grandma took me by the hand 
to the beehives 
I stepped into the sticky mud up to my ankles 
my eyes slipped down 
when I tasted for the first time 
the core of the honeycomb 
too sweet 

little by little 
my eyebrows thickened 
from dandelion to dandelion 
and baptism after baptism 
the tiny stars grew roots 
no more place in the sky for my eyes

now when it rains I search in vain 
my grandma’s big and black umbrella

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/7/2016 10:35:00 AM
WISH YOU WERE STILL POSTING
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Date: 4/12/2014 9:43:00 PM
Hi Cristina ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:27:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , christina
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Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/7/2014 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram! Wishing you a good day today, Cristina
Date: 4/2/2014 8:24:00 AM
April 1st - that's the day I joined in 2012! Welcome Cristina! I like yours already :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:17:00 AM
Gracious thanks to you Toquyen ! :)
Date: 4/2/2014 3:40:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Christina :) - I choose your first very nice written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/2/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise. I will follow the rules of this site and hope to read and comment on your poems and others soon. You are welcome any time :)
Date: 4/1/2014 10:34:00 PM
Christina, Epicly beautiful. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/2/2014 3:53:00 AM
Thank you very much SKAT. I wish you too the best in meeting people and friends and the very best poems possible :)
Date: 4/1/2014 6:50:00 AM
Cristina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/1/2014 9:30:00 AM
Oh! Thank you so much Linda. I will check your contest hoping to be inspired. As for your warm welcome, gracious thanks from my part, the prodigal son returning to this site after a long absence, caused by personal troubles and self rejection of my own poems, not by this wonderful community. Sending a white rose to you, Cristina
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