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The once was a man who sit on a thorn But he didn't know his blue jeans were torn Then a lady screamed "Oh dear, I think I can see his rear" He was as bare as the day he was born

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 3:02:00 AM
Larry, you're awesome. Love seeing you trying, can conquering other forms of poetry. Great job!
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:38:00 PM
LOL. Enjoyed. ... Ralph
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:28:00 PM
but I must peek! AT the cheeks!
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:18:00 PM
Lol, the tittle drew me into this one, and he he, funny write, love it!!!...P.D.
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Date: 6/20/2010 5:07:00 PM
Fantastic Limerick-I can only imagine the looks he got that day!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:58:00 PM
Very cute, enjoyed reading, love constance
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:38:00 PM
Interesting write...Leaves me questioning exactly what happened..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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