Don'T Look

The once was a man who sit on a thorn
But he didn't know his blue jeans were torn
Then a lady screamed "Oh dear,
I think I can see his rear"
He was as bare as the day he was born
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 22, 2010 at 3:02 AM
Larry, you're awesome. Love seeing you trying, can conquering other forms of poetry. Great job!
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June 21, 2010 at 5:38 PM
LOL. Enjoyed. ... Ralph
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June 20, 2010 at 6:28 PM
but I must peek! AT the cheeks!
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June 20, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Lol, the tittle drew me into this one, and he he, funny write, love it!!!...P.D.
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June 20, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Fantastic Limerick-I can only imagine the looks he got that day!~Tirzah~
La France Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Very cute, enjoyed reading, love constance
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June 20, 2010 at 3:38 PM
Interesting write...Leaves me questioning exactly what happened..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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