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Don'T Let Her Go

If I had a chance to say I love you Then I would Then I would If I had chance If had a chance again If I had a chance to say I love you Then I would Then I would If I had chance If had a chance again Before she walked out the door She screamed and threw glass on the floor she said I hate you I said I hate you more she said I am never coming back I said well now I am glad for sure She looked me in my eyes I looked her in her eyes And we wondered if our Words were truth or lie She started to cry she tryed To hold tears back so she Rubbed her eyes and walked Threw the door I grabbed the broom and swept the glass on the floor I heard three gun shots then I opened the door and there she was on the floor... it was her jealous ex boyfriend she didn't want him no more... I kneeled in her blood streaming on the floor,and lifted her lifeless body off the floor I Said come back baby Come back I won't say Those harsh things any more Come back baby Come back why the hell did you go Out that door Out that door Please get off the floor Let's go in side Her soul was no longer inside If I had a chance to say I love you Then I would Then I would If I had chance If had a chance again If I had a chance to say I love you Then I would Then I would If I had chance If had a chance again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 6:49:00 PM
Interesting! very esquiste choice of words. I sense a great deal of emotion and sensitiveness awesome in poetry.
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:44:00 AM
great write Elliot,great write bro
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:06:00 AM
Elliott! Been there; DONE THIS TOO! An aching heart authored this poem or one that has known an ache at some time or another...Repetition is so very effective as your imaginary exclamation marks...sincerely enjoyed! gwendolen
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Date: 6/23/2012 6:58:00 PM
A very sad story! I liked how you began and ended it with the refrain of voicing regret. Strong feelings!
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Date: 6/23/2012 4:49:00 PM
So very sad, we don't allways get second chances, love elizabeth
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