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Don't Interrupt the Music

Dissonance is delegating the intensity in my eyes Minor chords unveil the passion my body can’t belie Eighth notes are lightning sparks that burn my finger tips And when you play Fminor7 I tend to bite my lips. I want you to scale my thighs the way you play A minor harmonic Deftly wrenching haunting moans Experiences anything but platonic Allegro Legato Crescendo Vibrato Sing to me in Italian and tell me to hold my tongue But if anyone interrupts the music … a piano's lid comes crashing down--the last note never sung.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/15/2013 11:30:00 AM
Allegro Legato Crescendo Vibrato...there goes the ascending cheerful vibrating legacy...mucho mucho!
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Date: 12/22/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Krystal. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:11:00 PM
Dear Krystal, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:46:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:08:00 PM
Great poem, krystal. Congratulations on being featured. Do you really do that? Crash down the piano lid? Just wondering... Dane
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:15:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Krystal. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 11:02:00 PM
hell yea. i love minor7 chords. good work.
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:17:00 PM
Whew!! It's getting a little warm in here!! Keep playing that passionate music, please! I ain't gonna' close the lid! Great stuff Krystal...Tim
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful poem Krystal, i just love music. Nearly all my poems have been written listening to music>>James
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Date: 9/16/2009 9:31:00 PM
original and creative! Krystal!...jim
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Date: 9/16/2009 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Krystal. Excellent. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/16/2009 11:44:00 AM
I love the tone and the ending of this piece, Krystal! There is something doubtlessly romantic about music, even the technical aspects. Yet, the imagery of the final line slams home both notions well: that creshendo requires committment to the moment. Well done! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 9/16/2009 11:19:00 AM
Interesting Rhyme uses music as the voice. Keep writing. Sara
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