Don'T Give Up

Don’t give up at seventeen
    should your world seem cruel and mean
people grow and they mature
                   uncertainty will be made sure

Don’t give up at thirty-one  
                when the world’s run out of fun
babies grow and debt recedes 
           one day, you’ll serve all your needs

Don’t give up at fifty-two 
                when they’ve all run out on you
Children won’t forget their past
                 as they seek their world at last

Don’t give up at sixty-nine
    though it seems you’ve crossed the line
Silver days refine the heart
       reflect, and then make that new start
 
Don’t give up at eighty-three
        still you breathe, there’s much to see  
love and spirit never die
                 Someday, you will find out why
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 9:25 PM
"Don’t give up at sixty-nine though it seems you’ve crossed the line Silver days refine the heart reflect, and then make that new start". This speaks directly to me as I rightly belong to this age group. Still there is scope for a new start. Your poem is such a beautigful source of inspiration, dear Mike.
Gentile Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Thank you for reading it Valsa and I am so glad that it resonated with you , Happy Sunday xxoo
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 10:39 PM
Mike, this is beautiful, such a precious message. Your poem is very encouraging! :)
Gentile Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Thank you BJ, I am so glad that it resonated with you xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Great message in your verse Mike, live for everyday whatever it brings, Tom
Gentile Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Tom!!! I hope you are well!
Downing  Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Your message will give hope to the broken ones. We often give up easily and not realizing there is so much more to life. Thank you, Mike, for sharing this uplifting poem.
Gentile Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Akkina !
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 7:53 AM
I love this, Mike! I love that you used various ages for we know not when thoughts were strike. I am almost 63 so I know many things you speak of and hve seen how my Dad mourns my mom. Don’t give up…you don’t know what you can’t see around the corner, what you give or even the love received. Blessings, dear friend!
Gentile Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:48 PM
So true, thank you Kim!
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:31 PM
I agree, Michael. ... And don't give up at 105, if you find yourself still alive -- in the year '2525.' lol.
Downing  Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 8:09 AM
LOL… Gershon, you have a great sense of humor :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 7:53 AM
LOL, Gershon!
Gentile Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 3:57 AM
OK, Mr Zager!!! I won't and don't you either!!!LOL
Goldsmith Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 2:33 PM
WOW!!! A powerful write. "Love It" FAV... So true "Don't Give Up." Have a great day.............
Gentile Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 3:57 AM
I am so glad you liked it Paula, Thank you so much xxoo
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 6:01 AM
I like your message, Mike--well done!
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Vijay!
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 3:35 AM
- A warm and uplifting poem, Mike :) - hugs
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Situation Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:45 PM
I love and look for originality. At least you got past 60. Great rhyming.
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Thank you Situation !!
Baker Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:00 PM
Excellent message, Mike. Just be glad to still be breathing and make the most out of the time we have left. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Thanks Bill, a happy week to you and Sara as well!!!
Lawrence Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Beautiful poignant words from your talented pen Mike ! I love how you encompass the timeline with love and positivity! Hugs to you , Susan :) xx
Gentile Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:54 PM
Susan, you are so kind , thanks so much xxoo
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 11:59 AM
I can't express my thanks for to you for posting this today Mike, i had a set back at home but your words have lifted my spirits and I will rise above it. hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Jan, I am so glad it helped!! So very sorry to hear of a set back and I am sending prayers and positivity your way xxoo
Seeker Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Bravo! I like this attitude :)
Gentile Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Seeker!!
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