Don'T Forget the Chips!

“Honey, did you buy the chips?” No baby, I’ll get that later"
Are you sure you won’t forget?” “Naw” 
“I’ll run by the store” on my way home from the gym
“What are you looking for?”  I ask. “My keys”. He says
“Where did you leave them?” I ask.  Right there” Pointing, He says 
"No", I shake my head as I point towards the top of the fridge, 
Where he left the keys
A quick exchange of a kiss and he's running out the door
"See you later babe.. I’m running late"
“Yeah, be home early to light the grill” I yell
Don’t worry, I will”. Those are the last words he says

It’s Monday Night Football everyone’s prep for the game. 
The beer is chilled, the beef set to grill 
Soon the guys will be over as it’ is our turn to host
Only ten minutes to game time, when loud laughter erupts
As seven men carrying beer kegs burst through the door
After the greetings and teasing and jostling subside
Every seat occupied and one bellows out, “Where're the chips?”
Each one looks at the other. Then they all look at me!
“Hey, don’t look at me!” I say. I exit and return, bringing bowls laden with chips…
He looks up at me with that smile and all I see, is the excited little boy in him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/27/2010 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:07:00 PM
Many congratulations Audery for this win.
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest, Audrey! I really enjoyed this story. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:38:00 PM
A nice story althought the last line of the first verse frightened me. congraltulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:07:00 PM
Congrats Audrey on your win tonight in the Story Time contest... with this brilliant piece .. enjoy your sweet success my friend with luv...
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your 9th Place win in my Story Time contest Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 11:30:00 PM
Aww,(: that's so cute.it's true, the husband/boyfriend will always act differently around his wife/girlfriend when he is with his friends.lol.you know that smile, as long as he acts like himself around you.it's just fine,right? -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/22/2010 6:51:00 PM
This is so cute, Audrey. You can always count on a football lover to be on time for Monday night's game. If you're seeing the "little boy in him," then you'd see the little girl in me when football season rolls around. I'm a big-time fan. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2010 11:55:00 AM
Well I am experiencing your last line today with Ron here... talk tomorrow .. as u can imagine I am now in Heaven... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:19:00 AM
Either you know him better, or he is always going to depend on you.. Nice and funny.. a good cheer I find here..p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:30:00 AM
Well penned story in narrative. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/20/2010 11:37:00 PM
A picture well painted, a story well told, great write, thank you Audrey for your kind comment, love Simone
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Date: 4/20/2010 11:31:00 PM
Looks like they are settled in for a good time. Just as well SOMEBODY remembered the chips....lots of smiles.. Maggie
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