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'Don't Fight it, Write it' Poetry Contest

Sponsor. John Lawless

Today as I sat down to write something, I ended up conjuring nothing. No thoughts came to stir up my brain, And no topic I found save my strain. The urge to write had grown into a fad, And I felt I was growing altogether mad. I was plagued by a fiery fancy to express, And a tormenting desire unable to suppress. With a mental state somewhat fierce, I climbed up and down the stairs. I stood upside down and raked my head, So that a little poem, into it would be fed. Feeling dizzy, I stood suddenly upright. But on my head hung a heavy weight. I poured some water over my head, But knew my fever hadn’t fled. Madly pacing across the room, I tripped and fell down on a broom. Rising, I screamed with all my might, Making the household ring in fright. ‘What the hell is it?’ I did shout, And wriggled in pain as from gout. In mad frenzy, I ran round the house. No one knew the reason for my fuss. Soon it dawned on me that I need to be relaxed, For I was far more than stressed. So, I sat down and closed my eyes Thinking, attempting to squeeze out a poem is unwise. I don’t know how long I sat in meditation, On waking up I got a fresh direction. From the grip of an entangling rigor, I restored my sanity and vigor. At dawn, on my desk I sat with a clear head. My senses were alert and my brain, no more dead. Ink freely spilled down and on fancy’s wings I flew. Forgot how I had sat the other day without even a clue!

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Date: 6/26/2023 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 6/26/2023 4:06:00 AM
Back with felicitations on your contest win, dear Valsa. An extraordinary composition replete with exquisite cadence and mellifluous verse, you eloquently expound upon profound sagacity.
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Date: 6/17/2023 3:24:00 AM
Super piece Valsa with nice rhyme and flow, you speak here with such sound wisdom. Hope all is well with you, blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 6/14/2023 7:11:00 AM
May will relate to the vibes you convey--when we finally get a breakthrough, it feels so good, as your ending lines ably illustrate.
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Date: 6/14/2023 7:00:00 AM
i agree, better be relaxing for inviting inspiration, not to be forced, it never works with me that way, thanks a lot for the elegant penning, enjoyed
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Date: 6/14/2023 1:06:00 AM
Yeah! Poetry can never be forced, Valsa:) great take:)
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:44:00 PM
Sounds like a blue-ribbon recipe, Valsa: Don't fight it, Write it! You have penned a neat little piece of Psycholo-Poetry! ~ Sigmund Shakespeare
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Date: 6/13/2023 12:45:00 PM
Love how you approached this challenge. Much differently than how I did. I never win these kinds of challenges, but I bet you will!
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Date: 6/13/2023 12:08:00 PM
A good thing to turn the writer's block into a poem...:)
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Date: 6/13/2023 12:02:00 PM
Valsa, your poetry is exquisitely crafted with profound and vivid imagery. It is a common struggle for writers to face creative droughts, but you have managed to write a poem about that very struggle, which is truly impressive.
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Date: 6/12/2023 6:52:00 PM
Ah, that is terrible when we long to write and come up empty, but look at you, you wrote a poem about how hard it had been to write a poem :) Very impressive! I am often frustrated with not being able to write, I'm also always in and out, or busy with things in the house or with my kids. Today I sat down to write for a few minutes before I had to go out again. I sat there, pressed for time, and that very topic of frustration made a quick Haiku, posted, and headed out the door. Poets must write!
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Date: 6/12/2023 11:32:00 AM
Nice poem. Om some days, muse does not show up however hard one tries,
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Date: 6/12/2023 6:01:00 AM
Well written Valsa. This sure shows what it can be like. Nice Fancy Wings ending too :)
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Date: 6/12/2023 2:47:00 AM
Bet you don't have the pain I have. Lovely poem. At the moment I feel like you, incapable of writing.
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