Dont Fade

NOTE:  This poem means a lot to me for it brings back memories of my childhood. My father, a WWII veteran was, in my eyes, indestructible. There was nothing he could not do.  My mother was a constant loving guiding force that led our home. They were always there for us. Life comes full circle and when I wrote this poem Mom and Dad were failing, elderly and a mere shadow of their prime glory. I missed those times and still do. As I raise my children I am nearing retirement and I wonder what they think of me these days. The same I hope.

Don’t fade Papa, don’t leave us alone,
Where is that strong man,
Who wisely ruled our home?
Strong were his hands that once led,
That picked us up when we fell,
And carried us safely to our beds.
 
Don’t fade Papa,
Who is this broken man before me?
It wasn’t that long ago,
He was the inspiration for us to see.
Life comes full circle to us all,
I am not as strong as I used to be,
“Papa come play ball with me!” I hear my son call.
 
Don’t fade Papa, don’t leave us alone,
Take us back, to our happy home.
 
Don’t fade Mama, don’t leave us alone,
Where is that strong woman,
The guiding light of our home?
Strong was her love that once led,
That tickled out tummies,
And tucked us snuggly into bed.
 
Don’t fade Mama,
Who is this broken woman before me?
It wasn’t that long ago,
She was the example for us to see,
Life comes full circle to us all,
I am not as strong as I used to be,
“Mama have tea with me with me” I hear my daughter call.
 
Don’t fade Mama, don’t leave us alone,
Take us back, to our happy home.

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Date: 5/12/2019 2:30:00 PM
Timothy, congrats on your win, I am humbled to stand along side your exceptional piece of poetry. All the best. John
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/13/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you friend!
Date: 5/12/2019 2:18:00 PM
I had such an emotional connection to your words in this beautifully written heartfelt poem Tim. Congratulations on your First place deserving win! This is a Fave for me too. : )
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/13/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Connie! <3
Date: 5/12/2019 9:15:00 AM
Exceptional poetry and I enjoyed what you wrote about your poem. This embodied what I was looking for. Congrats on your top placement.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/12/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard!
Date: 4/24/2019 3:18:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. I agree with Mark's comments below, it reads like a song. Congratulations on your marathon honors. This poem is going in my FAV's.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/24/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much PS!
Date: 4/21/2019 4:07:00 PM
this is wonderful poetry. Something I am feeling more and more in my life as I see my parents age, and my dad nearly on his death bed . Congrats for making the marathon winner list, and a Fave for this poem.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/21/2019 5:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea
Date: 4/20/2019 11:27:00 PM
Congrats, Timothy. Well done on your great placement.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/21/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Miss Line
Date: 4/20/2019 4:53:00 PM
Timothy, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 28th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/20/2019 7:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and all your efforts Mark ! The best to you and yours.
Date: 3/31/2019 8:54:00 PM
Such a nice verse with very deep emotion, Timothy, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/31/2019 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 3/30/2019 5:59:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Timothy! SO moving! Janice
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/30/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 3/30/2019 3:07:00 PM
Timothy, this is a very tender, nostalgic poem. It reminds me of the old, southern, heartrending songs that my mother used to sing to me when I was a little boy. Congratulations on your win on Mile 27 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your support of my contest has contributed to its success, and for that I am very grateful. ~Mark
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/30/2019 8:42:00 PM
I'm thankful for your effort.
Date: 7/7/2018 10:22:00 AM
A lovely nostalgic aura, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/6/2019 3:01:00 PM
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