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Don’t Ever Be Angry at Me

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In a married life, this happens quite often.

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When you turn away from me, It feels unbearably lonely. When you’re upset with me, Your promise to never speak again— It drowns my heart in silent waves of sorrow. When you turn away from me, I pick a single flower to win your favor, Yet you gently toss it aside before accepting me again. I wish I could be a flower, To blossom along your life’s journey And bring you joy and purpose. When you turn away from me, It feels unbearably lonely. Our bond seems more fragile than a thread, Yet still I wipe my tears And strive to speak to you. Your half-smile—the one you never complete— Kills the breath in my chest. When you turn away from me, It feels unbearably lonely. I vow to hold you in my arms forever, To never let you be upset with me again. Your hair—like dark clouds—frames your beauty, And in you, I see the moon, Making me forget the sky above.

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Date: 7/15/2025 12:00:00 AM
To be in love and be with the loved one is a special joy. The feeling that one's love is not properly reciprocated by the partner is a heart wrenching feeling. The assurance at the end of the poem is so very consoling and heart warming.
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Date: 7/14/2025 6:24:00 PM
I hoping this isn't true, my friend. Striving to heal a dying or broken relationship is heartbreaking. Well-written and emotional, Jay. Go poetry for a sad topic. Bill
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Date: 7/14/2025 10:42:00 AM
When you turn away from me, It feels unbearably lonely. It sure does when we quarrel like angry birds, lol, keep it in love dear poet !
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