Don'T Dash

love doesn’t dash, it loiters
with repeated movements like music
and beautifully crude endearments

love doesn’t dash, it lingers
with rhythms like dance?
and boastfully rude aphorisms

So dally with me my love
lollygag, lounge and in a while
we'll share breaths and mess about
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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June 16, 2021 at 9:05 AM
and mess about... I love that... I am going to tell my guy that later... hehe... Lovely write. Lots of fun. Imagery spot on. Ann
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August 1, 2020 at 8:21 AM
This is creatively different. I immediately identified with the uniqueness with which love operates. Blessings.
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August 1, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thank you =]
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