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Don'T Burn After Reading

To my daughter who never listens.

Life is not as simple as a cliché.
It's not lullabies and butterflies.
Not all sounds are soothing,
not all flowers are faithful.
It's not as relaxing as a reverie,
rarely as poetic as a poem,
so you can't hide everything behind metaphors.
You have to express your true verses,
you have to serenade in your own melody -
but never forget the chorus to our song.

Life is full of storytellers who will lead you astray,
so never believe everything you hear or see -
create your own biography, make your own history.

Our existence is fragile like petals,
yet your birth created an oasis in my heart.
I remember when they said you would not blossom,
yet you flourished in essences of evergreen elegance.
I was the first to cradle you in my arms, 
as I promised to protect you endlessly.
Hoping that you would soar forever,
spread your wings higher and higher.

We never truly realise the sacrifices of our parents.
I wonder if you will ever know,
how sometimes all I had left was my smile -
never would I reveal my frailties.
It was not a simple case of masculinity,
because even the most ferocious lion cries.
I hope you never face a struggle,
as difficult as the trials forsaken upon me

and
I'm sorry if at times you saw no emotions,
apologies for the tears I never let you see,
nor the fears I never allowed you to feel,
but it was the way I was brought up to be,
it's how reality curated my personality.
If the suppression of my feelings made you distant -
remember a father will always be a shepherd for his flock.

Wars from the past have infiltrated mankind,
yet there will be many battles to come -
just don't fall asleep among heartless sleeping souls.

I shiver upon the thought of our closing goodbye,
when my shield can no longer protect you,
as every knight has to eventually lay down his sword.
The world can be a cruel and wild place,
and I remind you there is always a rainy day,
so choose wisely the paths to ponder upon -
learn how to build your own abode.

You'll always be a baby in my eyes.
I'll always be so proud.
Even in silence... I will forever love you.

Dad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
October 25, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Oh, this is so beautiful! What sensitivity!
Seeker Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 9:59 AM
I’m sure if your daughter reads this, she will listen! Beautifully penned, wise counsel as always, Silent One ~ warmest congratulations on your win
Proxenos Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 7:11 AM
What a heartfelt poem Silent One,and you sound as wonderful a father as was my father, he died of Cancer at the age of 64, I had to be strong for my 7 year old son, we were all incredibly sad but Ricky wailed, not cried when I picked him up from school, although I had prepared him as much as you can a 7 year old. Grandfather and grandson so close. Your poem to your daughter brought back many happy memories, my dad would be proud to see how Ricky has blossomed. Blessings and hugs my friend - Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:13 PM
It's sad if you are estranged. Joe does not read my poems either but somehow we stay together after all these years. I hope things work out. This poem is poignantly heartfelt
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 7:35 AM
- I could use many of these lines...rainy days one of the things that are important to learn...life is not a journey on rose petals...but, we always want to protect our children...my child is the most valuables I have created in my life - I love your letter to your daughter, S.O. ... I hope she will listen - hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:37 AM
This may be one of your best. That’s saying a lot because you are a fabulous writer. A pleasure to read.
Rose  Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 6:35 PM
I have sent you an audio to your poem via email, I hope you received it well, thanks for sharing this beauty !
Sands Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Oh my, another special poem. Overflowing with love and authenticity! Brilliant masterpieces you have written Silent One. It is so nice to read your writing :)
Zahid Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 2:04 AM
Wow, this is lovely.. I loved it. She would be so proud :)
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:18 PM
This poem is an exquisite masterpiece, overflowing with an abundance of love that can only be felt by a parent. Every line is crafted with such finesse and beauty, resonating deeply within the depths of my soul. It encapsulates the unconditional love and protection that a parent yearns to provide for their precious offspring. It portrays the delicate balance between concealing our own hardships, tears, and vulnerabilities while showcasing our unwavering strength in order to shield and safeguard our beloved children.
Silence Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Wow..this brought tears to my eyes..I feel this piece so hard..the love of a parent, trying to shield their babies, so we don’t always show our struggles, tears, vulnerabilities, yet we want to show them out strengths and protect them however we can..and the whole of the 5th “I’m sorry” verse touched my heart as i felt it so deeply..your poems are truly phenomenal and so profoundly written, like a hit to the soul. I have always said you are an extraordinary poet! It’s so hard not to feel deeply as one reads your poetry, this is truly a masterpiece that pulls at the heart and soul, my friend! It is truly an honor to read and re-read! This poem as a whole is so brilliantly woven and heartfelt as all your poems are!
Bowring Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:08 PM
What a beautiful, touching poem SO - full of love that only a parent can give. There are so many wonderful, well written lines. ‘ Never forget the chorus to our song’.The last two stanza’s are simply gorgeous. Loved it! Thank you so much for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 7:40 PM
The purest form of poetry; truth, your words holding every thought and pattern that a parents overcomes. I really felt this line; “ I shiver upon the thought of our closing goodbye, when my shield can no longer protect you“ now who doesn't have that thought everytime they hug their children. Beautiful Pg
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:51 PM
wow, you made me shed tears of joy and pain dear friend, may I read this aloud with your permission. I would need your email to send it to you, please send it via soupmail, thanks
Kauffman Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 12:45 PM
There is a stunning reality to every line, SO with poetry captured in it's rich essence - "even the most ferocious lion cries," "life is not as simple as a clique," "every knight has to eventually lay down his sword." These are memorable lines and remarkable images created by a master poet. Thank you for so graciously sharing your immense talent with us! Sending you blessings!
Onpaper Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Wow brothaa .. the weight this piece carried is so moving .. your daughter is soo lucky.. such an emotive piece .. a true shepherd to his flock.. if only my father do this kind of shepherdry like this ??????
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Nice tribute to your daughter, SO. Like most families, the children grow up, think they know everything, and think their parents know very little that is pertinent in their lives. Last line is the best, the love will always be there. Blessings, Bill
DiMino Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Beautiful! A lucky daughter. "Life is full of storytellers who will lead you astray, so never believe everything you hear or see - create your own biography, make your own history." Great advice for everyone. Blessings my friend.
Messina Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Absolutely precious...I love this! Great writting, Shizuka...a heartfelt message to your daughter(s).
Gentile Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 4:50 AM
I don't think that I have ever read so eloquent a declaration of love Silent One! I am sincere who I say that it truly brought forth a tear! I am not a parent and so I know that I cannot fully understand and yet reading your heartfelt lines really makes me feel that I can! Happy Tuesday !!!
Downing  Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 8:37 PM
I don’t know how I missed this most beautiful and heartwarming piece to your daughter. Just beautiful, S.O :)
Lindley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:03 PM
My very good friend, this is to me a very clear masterpiece of truth and love written to a beloved daughter. She must be so very proud of you - her great protector. I know, I raised my daughter K.K. the same way. She is now thirty-five years old and flourishing with her 6 dental practices. This true gem is a fav.. God bless you.
Nicole Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:33 AM
We all make choices, as we travel down many unknown paths. As parents, we are to guide our children, in hopes they make the right choice. Do our best, that's all that's required. Your words are from the depth of your heart, and they hold unconditional love. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Hugs, Brandy
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 2:57 AM
No words would suffice to let you know how deeply I'm touched with your words to your precious daughter! You are a parent amazingly wrapped in the robe of a great poet who has the depth, the beauty, the shape, the images, the metaphors, the verses and rhymes to engrave your insightful message and render in unique artistry what a dad would feel for and say to his so precious daughter! What a gem, Silent One! So elating to read you! God bless you..
Daniel Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 2:46 AM
A lovely heartfelt letter to your daughter, SO, you write so beautifully:)
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