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Don't bring me chocolate Bounty is given in a bouquet of flowers Don't bring me fancy perfumes Just a playful present, Windsong powders

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Abe Lopez

Date: 12/3/2009 5:44:00 PM

Thanks for letting a man know ... It takes all the guess work out ..... and that makes it easy for us.... LOL and smiles!

James Fraser

Date: 12/3/2009 12:38:00 PM

Kool piece Sara >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 12/2/2009 12:29:00 AM

Sara thanks for your welcome comments and kind words today.rgds Brian

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/1/2009 3:18:00 PM

Ah a woman who likes the simple things yet with taste... Well written. I like this piece.... RdP

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/1/2009 10:28:00 AM

I like your light poem, Sara. Your choice of present is admirable. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Do not Knock. - Mohammad