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Dominik, I want you to Understand why your mom Feels so light and free. I believe I have flown Through life. I remember flying from The sheltered wings Of my family as I flew To Saskatoon Saskatchewan Thinking I would be a Free bird out from under Glaring eyes and uncomfortable Comments parents seem to Smother you with. As reality sunk in that Holding an apartment, Job, and car did not mix Well with having a social life I was once again in flight frenzy. With head in the clouds I sailed Back to Ontario were I Lasted a few years until Once again my wings needed Airing and I took a ride On the wind a little Westward bound for nowhere Getting nowhere. Days were happy and that’s Where I was engaged, The first time. After three years I Literally flew, this time Over the ocean to Europe Where I met the love of my life. Now although my wings were Itching for the clean air above The clouds and I wanted To fly this coop on several Occasions, I soon had Two little birds that needed Tweeting and so I only flew On occasion but always Returned to my main Breeding area. On the day I became a widow I started planning my next flight Which took you and I over the ocean To the land I love. Now here I sit on my sofa Writing poetry and reminiscing All my flights of the past and Hoping with all my heart to Become a Snowbird. I want you to know No matter where I fly You are now always in my heart. 09.20.2014 Contest: Free Verse Poem Regina Riddle HM

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Date: 9/27/2014 8:05:00 AM
Good morning Brenda, Congratulations on a solid win and interesting travel/nostalgia poem. Have a great week end. Earl
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Earl
Date: 9/27/2014 2:03:00 AM
Deep feelings, Brenda. Congratulations on your win!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Fabiyas
Date: 9/26/2014 9:55:00 PM
A lovely write and congratulations. These poems are posted in a free verse blog now, so please stop by. Thank you so much for entering. God bless you and I love your poetry. With love and prayers, Gina
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thank you Regina
Date: 9/26/2014 6:18:00 PM
I am SO pleased to see this on the winners list Brenda many congrats on your HM:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 6:45:00 PM
:-). Thanks Jan.
Date: 9/24/2014 4:07:00 PM
Very good write...and this judge rates it a 7 as well! Brenda, your wings have served you well; nothing wrong with being a free spirit as long as common sense is not lost along the way! Take care. // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul. Actually I have only flown when I was free.
Date: 9/20/2014 5:03:00 PM
You truly are a free bird in flight Brenda - the imagery here is incredible - i love the line 'I soon had Two little birds that needed Tweeting' it made me almost tearful it is so expressive and full of love:-) I hope this does very well for you my friend its a 7 from this judge! Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2014 3:36:00 PM
you have made my day:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/21/2014 3:30:00 PM
Just for you Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2014 3:45:00 AM
but children do tweet and squawk like birds especially when they are little I just think tweeting is so cute here:-) hugs jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 10:55:00 PM
Now I see why you think it's so funny lol. I just don't want others to think I'm an idiot.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2014 5:22:00 PM
Noooo put it back to tweeting lol :-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/20/2014 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan. It was supposed to say tweaking. Now it does lol. Silly auto correct does what it wants.

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