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domestic labor

carrying chopped wood

to stack in our supply pile ...

my whole day splintered

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Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2019 at 3:54 PM

lOVE THIS, Caycay. Big congrats.

Constance La France

June 10, 2019 at 11:15 AM

CayCay congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Connie Marcum Wong

June 8, 2019 at 8:49 PM

You have to Fave this beauty CayCay! Excellent my friend! : ) xxoo

Gershon Wolf

June 5, 2019 at 7:28 PM

Bullseye, CayCay. You've 'shivered me timbers' with this one. Smiles, Gershon

Kurt Ravidas

June 3, 2019 at 6:40 PM

Oh, yeah, senryu as it is. Perfect twist :3

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

June 3, 2019 at 7:26 AM

Great end line completes this wonderful Senryu

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2019 at 1:49 PM

Now THIS Is how to do SENRYU!! The perfect end line, Caycay. I do not see too many that do a great twist like this! Going out to walk my dog sometime today. Feel free to call if you want!

Alkas Poetry

June 2, 2019 at 9:22 AM

Splinted in harmony and in poetry... That's the way it should be congrats and good luck CayCay salute alkas

Gordon Mcconnell

June 1, 2019 at 3:36 PM

Good penning CayCAy. Well done!

Jennifer Proxenos

June 1, 2019 at 9:31 AM

VERY clever write and a sure win. a great last line - a splintered day and splinters in your hand - shame CayCay, but hope the person in your poem 'A Day Scar Drama' was in that pile! Love and hugs Jennifer. Good luck in the contest!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 1, 2019 at 12:57 AM

Oh this is really good CayCay! I hope it is a top winner! : ) xxoo

Daniel Turner

May 31, 2019 at 8:45 PM

When I was young, I used to hate chopping and stacking wood but as I grew older i got to where I really enjoyed the exercise. I haven't done it in quite a while. It would probably kill me now. i enjoyed your humor CayCay. Good luck!

Heidi Sands

May 31, 2019 at 8:04 AM

I know what that is like. Well written :)

Swetha Vangaveti

May 31, 2019 at 8:03 AM

Very well penned :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 31, 2019 at 7:23 AM

Ow! This is so good! ;D

Tom Cunningham

May 31, 2019 at 3:22 AM

hah, love your last line CayCay, Good luck. Tom

CayCay Godwin

May 31, 2019 at 6:29 AM

Good morning, Thomas - thank you for the comments. Was easy to write because I really did help clear a pile of chopped wood, unchopped limbs, kindling sticks and various other yesterday (I actually enjoyed it though.) An odd pile to sort on a summer's day, huh? All the best ... CayCay

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