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domestic labor

carrying chopped wood to stack in our supply pile ... my whole day splintered

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2019 3:54:00 PM

lOVE THIS, Caycay. Big congrats.

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2019 11:15:00 AM

CayCay congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/8/2019 8:49:00 PM

You have to Fave this beauty CayCay! Excellent my friend! : ) xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2019 7:28:00 PM

Bullseye, CayCay. You've 'shivered me timbers' with this one. Smiles, Gershon

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 6/3/2019 6:40:00 PM

Oh, yeah, senryu as it is. Perfect twist :3

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 6/3/2019 7:26:00 AM

Great end line completes this wonderful Senryu

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2019 1:49:00 PM

Now THIS Is how to do SENRYU!! The perfect end line, Caycay. I do not see too many that do a great twist like this! Going out to walk my dog sometime today. Feel free to call if you want!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/2/2019 9:22:00 AM

Splinted in harmony and in poetry... That's the way it should be congrats and good luck CayCay salute alkas

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/1/2019 3:36:00 PM

Good penning CayCAy. Well done!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/1/2019 9:31:00 AM

VERY clever write and a sure win. a great last line - a splintered day and splinters in your hand - shame CayCay, but hope the person in your poem 'A Day Scar Drama' was in that pile! Love and hugs Jennifer. Good luck in the contest!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2019 12:57:00 AM

Oh this is really good CayCay! I hope it is a top winner! : ) xxoo

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/31/2019 8:45:00 PM

When I was young, I used to hate chopping and stacking wood but as I grew older i got to where I really enjoyed the exercise. I haven't done it in quite a while. It would probably kill me now. i enjoyed your humor CayCay. Good luck!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2019 8:04:00 AM

I know what that is like. Well written :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/31/2019 8:03:00 AM

Very well penned :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/31/2019 7:23:00 AM

Ow! This is so good! ;D

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/31/2019 3:22:00 AM

hah, love your last line CayCay, Good luck. Tom

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/31/2019 6:29:00 AM

Good morning, Thomas - thank you for the comments. Was easy to write because I really did help clear a pile of chopped wood, unchopped limbs, kindling sticks and various other yesterday (I actually enjoyed it though.) An odd pile to sort on a summer's day, huh? All the best ... CayCay