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huge pod of dolphins enjoy synchronized swimming ~ children collect shells A Moment in Nature Poetry Contest Sponsored By Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 Checked with How Many Syllables 01/24/21

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Ken Allan Dronsfield

Date: 2/2/2021 12:41:00 PM

A lovely haiku jan! Ken xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 PM

Charming, Jan ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2021 2:12:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/27/2021 12:36:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! So delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/26/2021 5:07:00 PM

A happy picture Jan. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:25:00 PM

thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2021 3:12:00 PM

Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:24:00 PM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2021 2:39:00 PM

Hey, way to go, Jan. You did fantastic with your KU! Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:23:00 PM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/26/2021 2:10:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:24:00 PM

thanks so much tania i am delighted to be on the winner's list!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2021 5:54:00 AM

Dolphins are such a joy!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:23:00 PM

they are so wonderful to see kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/25/2021 9:22:00 AM

Hi Jan, we haven't been for a holiday in almost two years. From the flat in Umhlanga, on the North coast of Natal we saw a pod of over 300 dolphins. It was truly magnificent and, on another one of our holidays I sat with binoculars and gazed out over the sea and saw two whales - I quickly shouted for Elias to come, we couldn't believe our luck. Our guests arrived and couldn't believe what they were seeing, they have lived in Umhlanga for 20 years and have never seen one. Felt so honored they gave us this show. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:22:00 PM

oh wow Jennifer that must have been an amazing sight, i doubt we will travel for the foreseeable future even when lockdown ends for us all:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/25/2021 12:59:00 AM

Perfect haiku. Dolphins are such gentle creatures. In the past I used to see them occasionally. Now I've become a stay at home ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 3:21:00 PM

they are so wonderful to observe, sadly sightings of them and basking sharks were so limited last year:-( hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/24/2021 3:03:00 PM

Very vivid realism Jan, a picture pops out immediately from your haiku, a moment in nature indeed

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2021 3:24:00 PM

thanks David there was a noticeable lack of marine creatures around the Island last year, lets hope the trend reverses this year:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2021 1:40:00 PM

I love dolphins too, Jan. Hey, was this a haiku contest?? for some reason, I did not know that!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2021 1:55:00 PM

Yes Tania's new contest is haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/24/2021 1:33:00 PM

WoW! Jan, You penned such a lovely image. I remember when I was on a boat, I saw dolphins doing flips. It was such a breathtaking moment in my life that I will never forget. Your haiku allowed me to reflect on that beautiful experience. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2021 1:34:00 PM

thanks Alexis it is so amazing to see:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2021 12:54:00 PM

Such wonderful memories of the seashore. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/24/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Victor there were few pods of dolphins last year and also sightings of basking sharks were very much reduced:-( hugs Jan xx