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Dolor Ebbs Valor

Dolor ebbs valor As I sob in deep midnight darkness, bleeding tears of his betrayal make me drown... Lose way in whirlpool of incessant thoughts, I leap to cut through and through, Subtle desires breathe last.. Ecstatic beats can't help muffle down, rhyming hearts no more send melody, some broken beads of diffused parody, Plucked strings snuff my clown..... The bruises on soul silently traipse abysmal, blackness I embrace ferrying the albatross, Bane of dolor ebbs valor. Written Sept 6th, 2016 For poetry contest "Challenge- write one" Sponsor- Broken wings

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Date: 9/10/2016 4:30:00 AM
Wonderful piece from a dexterous poet......Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 9/9/2016 4:37:00 PM
A very emotive and powerful poem, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/9/2016 1:54:00 PM
Betrayal bruises both heart and soul and leaves lasting scars. A worthy topic for this tricky challenge. Upma. ~ Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:25:00 AM
A very beautiful write , Excellent words....betrayal hurts a lot....bruises the soul ...presented so well, hearty congrats dear Dr. Upma !!....love, Anu:)
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Date: 9/9/2016 7:59:00 AM
Dr. Upma, wonderful poem....congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/8/2016 8:26:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...on a deep write and win...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:11:00 AM
Sad write Doc. Hopefully just a poem! I wouldn't like to know you were sad. Eloquent as always and masterfully written. Good luck, Doc!
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