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Doing the Zodiac Sign

She said I love to do the 69 So there we were in my zodiac sign She on top Me ready to pop As we rolled down the hill into a prickly vine. Nine months later it’s not mine It must be the prickly vine You were prick here and there I remember your orgasmic stare The little bugger has a woody pecker down there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 12:40:00 PM
Many congratulations Sidney on your win in pd's contest >> James
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sidney in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 7:17:00 PM
LoL, SIDNEY, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:47:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest with this humorous entry
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Sidney
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:06:00 AM
oh wow...super congrats on your awesome win with these funny and witty limericks, Sidney--:) -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/26/2010 1:28:00 AM
Yikes! Congratulations to you Mr. I can make you smile ;) enjoyed this for the umpteenth time (",)
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Date: 9/26/2010 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations! My friend, for a fun to read poem. Enjoyed this one for the 4th time. lol,, later,..p.d.
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:12:00 PM
hahaha this is really clever. I can't even think right now which sign is 69. Looks like maybe Cancer? a big congrats to you! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 10:24:00 PM
Sidney my friend great job on the number one poem in P.D.'s contest...it had to be the 69 that reeled her in ..a great choice for first place.. congrats my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 9/14/2010 8:01:00 PM
This started out so sexy at first, then ended so dang funny. The middle kinda sucks if true. Love the way you have chosen to look at an imperfect situation. Monica
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:30:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:51:00 PM
Hehe thats why I left the ending up to the reader :-)
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:34:00 PM
Ooh that is just wicked Mr Hall, but oh so awesome hehe :) Wilma
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:23:00 PM
Oh! Me oh my, I think I owe you one, and I will reply to a similar comment. The top one about hummm your sign:-) HOW DELIGHTFUL! Second so funny and poor poor her,,tangled in the ultimate zodiac sign..LOL,..loved Your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:52:00 PM
Mr. Hall, They all deny 'em especially in the divorce. LOL
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:41:00 PM
A perfect piece Sidney my friend.. u had me at y9our opening line.. with 69..haha... enjoyed and hope we have a contest for this one.. its so awesome luv.. enjoyed ...more than enjoyed... super enjoyed..
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:12:00 PM
hahaha this poem is funny, but also good.!
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