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Doing the Splits Got knickers in a twist doing the splits Tearing my trousers and hurting my hips Hubby made hullabaloo Turning the atmosphere blue And now I’m hobbling around on two sticks. +*+*+*+ 13th May 2023 Funny, Bawdy or Humorous Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/19/2023 8:57:00 AM

Ha. Very funny Belle. I congrats are in order! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2023 12:36:00 PM

cute one, Belle. Big congrats on the win.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2023 2:51:00 PM

Thank you very much Andrea… Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2023 6:17:00 PM

Hi Belle, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2023 2:50:00 PM

Thank you again Alexis… Belle

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/28/2023 5:56:00 PM

Good one, Belle! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2023 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Janice, appreciated… Belle

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/28/2023 11:27:00 AM

Belle, a cute limerick, oh the imagery, ha ha, congratulations on your winning placement!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2023 5:17:00 PM

Thank you Tania, I enjoyed entering your contest and I’m thrilled with the placement… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/18/2023 2:11:00 PM

Good one Belle! I could never do these, even as a girl Bummer. Great limerick, Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/28/2023 5:29:00 PM

Holy smokes, Belle.sorry to hear of this…I was in Hospital for three months at16! But for skeletal issues. I had a tutor and my roommates were international. There were even Siamese twins separated.I saw them after surgery. The saddest part was a boy, my age, 16, died from cancer,I can still see his face, he was beautiful and we joked a lot.but I was heartbroken when he passed. I-had a friend who not only did the splis but could wrap her legs behind her neck, thank yoo for rekindling these times! xxx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2023 5:13:00 PM

Neither could I do the splits, Pangie, but then I was in hospital for three months with a septic hip at twelve years of age, was never agile again. Thank you, Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2023 2:18:00 AM

Sometimes it is best to let others do the exercises for the young as we relax in the recliner or do our chair yoga. Thanks for the humor today and the visit to my page. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2023 5:14:00 PM

I agree Sara, best to sit back and relax. Thank you… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2023 1:55:00 PM

hahaha I can picture it so clearly Belle lol:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/28/2023 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Jan xx

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/14/2023 1:31:00 AM

Almost happened to me. My back aches.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/14/2023 6:43:00 AM

So does mine without trying to do the splits. Thank you Victor… Belle

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2023 10:32:00 PM

Oh my goodness, lol, I can almost relate! It's been awhile, but the memory flooded me as I read this. Almost thirty years ago now, I tried a cartwheel, though not the splits, thank goodness! That trick left me with memories very much like this. I learned then, the hard way, my youth had flown. Oh the memory of pain!! My hubby didn't laugh, he was not amused at all! But the kids sure did! It took me a week or two to get over that trick. Hilarious image in your poem Belle :D

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/14/2023 6:48:00 AM

That made me laugh BJ imagining the kids watching your antics and hubby not amused. It’s been a very long time since I tried acrobatics in the garden with my sisters, those were the days. Thank you… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2023 8:35:00 PM

Ain't it a shame! Of course, hubby's to blame...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/14/2023 6:41:00 AM

Of course, aren’t hubby’s always to blame when things go wrong. Thank you Gershon… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2023 7:27:00 PM

The mental image you painted with your clever limerick had me smiling out loud, Belle. Also, nice choice of picture. It's a strong contender for the prize. Success in the contest! Thanks for the hilarious moments.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/14/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank you Sotto, pleased this gave you a smile…Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/13/2023 5:41:00 PM

Lol! Belle, Your well-written limerick created a hilarious image in my head. You chose a good picture too. It should do well in the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks for the laughs:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/13/2023 6:13:00 PM

Lol! I used to do the splits in my younger days. These days I too just dream about it.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/13/2023 6:04:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, an image is all it is I could never do the splits, I wish I could…. Belle :)