Janice Canerdy Poet Footle

Doing a 180

Tipsy
Lipsy

Too much
liquor

made her
snicker

balk and
bicker

acted 
foolish

downright 
mulish

shamed poor 
Mama

with her 
drama

angered 
Father 

such a
bother

almost
tragic---

then like
magic

transfor-
mation

brings e-
lation

cele-
bration!


October 16, 2022

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Marikate Kingston January 21, 2023 at 11:58 AM I am glad there was finally magic, whew! Somtimes we just do not think before sipping that drink.

Michelle Faulkner October 22, 2022 at 9:44 AM I never could hold my liquor, I would act foolish too- Janice Canerdy October 23, 2022 at 2:51 PM Thanks, Michelle! :-) Janice

Rico Leffanta October 17, 2022 at 11:29 AM "There is a season" . . . though painful, hangovers are repeated . . . .Aloha! Janice Canerdy October 17, 2022 at 9:57 PM Thanks, Rico. Janice

Sand Blown October 16, 2022 at 2:59 PM ...e(motive)-emotions.....the young : / ...stans sand Janice Canerdy October 16, 2022 at 6:54 PM Thanks, Sand. Janice