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i'm just doing my time, for a previous crime, that of course i don't remember, logic says yeah, what did i did there? the passion pit pain I surrender, dumbos like me, just canna be free, me tangle-foot, trips in the heather, the women sublime, yet I had a good time, still pay for whats mine, never, never? or whether.... Don

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Date: 12/27/2013 6:54:00 PM
doing is the best part of life.. Don, Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. always.. Linda
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Date: 12/27/2013 7:28:00 PM
yes had lots of fun with everyone...and Santa came of course...happy new year babe xox
Date: 9/26/2013 9:18:00 AM
You have a cool style of writing; it's refreshing. I also enjoyed this piece as well. Great write! :)
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:10:00 AM
I always enjoy the flow of thought or feelings in every of your poems, Don
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:33:00 PM
Ah, stumble we may, and do a lil' time my Bubby~ but somehow when we pry the bars apart... you still shine, bright as ever.... I love ya bunches!!! My Lovely Bubby, Cindy Lu (I've missed you! :)
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