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Line at the Loo

Dogtrot

There is only one port-a-pot
and all the pups are quite distraught.
	The largest bladder of all
	inside a poodle so small!
He’s peeing at a full dogtrot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Linda, cute and you're making me smile. I can't imagine how this picture was taken. I can only imagine the dogs were sedated or it was made through AI.
Fowler Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 3:01 PM
LOL I'm not sure I want to know how it was taken Duke. It might take some of the fun away. LOL Glad you smiled! :)
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Either the prince or the princess of Pee! -- Replacing 'The Princess and the Pea!' lol. ~ gw
Fowler Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:32 AM
LOL gw. Glad you enjoyed this one. PP :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Got a chuckle. We had a male Chihuahua and he was trying to go and go to mark his territory when he ran out of fluid way back. LOL..Thanks for sharing. Made my day. Keep on writing. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Thanks dear Sara. I'm glad you got a chuckle from this. LOL Got to love the little chis! :)
Horne Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:36 AM
LOL, got a chuckle
Fowler Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Chuckles and giggles are next best to belly laughs Jack. So glad you enjoyed! Thank you :)
Bell Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:34 AM
That's a big area to scent, he needs a big bladder for that. Wonder if St Bernards are easy to look after. lol
Fowler Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:56 AM
LOL. I don't really want to find out Paul. Thanks for stopping by! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:06 AM
LOL…what a poodle
Fowler Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 11:23 AM
LOL Kim...a leftover from my efforts for Margarita's contest. Thanks :)
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