Patrizia Cohen Poet Free verse

Dog's Thoughts

Need to understand:
What I am?
But more important:
What is this?
I have four paws and a tail
This has two paws and no tail
I'm little, but strong
This is bigger and taller
I like to leak this thing
It gives out strange sounds
What an unusual situation!
But not bad, if I have to say
I used to live in a cage
It came and brought me away
Here, where I'm wondering now
I don't know yet, but I like it.

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Beata Agustin June 27, 2025 at 11:49 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 26, 2016 at 11:13 PM PATRIZIA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **

Vicky Tsiluma September 18, 2013 at 10:25 AM Cleverly done Patrizia! It is often a wonder how different species process their thoughts in their daily living - you've managed to bring out a realistic reading. Well penned.

Mario De Paz June 1, 2013 at 4:54 AM Who, as me, loves animals and owns dogs appreciates this naive thought of the animal rendered free by his owner. It perceives man as a thing for licking which emits strange sounds. But the dog is able to understand these strange sounds while man hardly is able to interpret barking!

Sean L Sanders May 21, 2013 at 7:33 PM I like this poem you may want to check your spelling don't worry I misspell everything all the time. Great poem poet

Ndaba Sibanda May 14, 2013 at 10:08 AM A poser for me, but great read. Congrats on your membership renewal!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2012 at 8:04 AM I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Patrizia. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol Patrizia Cohen July 11, 2012 at 8:11 AM Thank you very much, Carol!