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Dog's Thoughts

Need to understand: What I am? But more important: What is this? I have four paws and a tail This has two paws and no tail I'm little, but strong This is bigger and taller I like to leak this thing It gives out strange sounds What an unusual situation! But not bad, if I have to say I used to live in a cage It came and brought me away Here, where I'm wondering now I don't know yet, but I like it.

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Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:13:00 PM

PATRIZIA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/18/2013 10:25:00 AM

Cleverly done Patrizia! It is often a wonder how different species process their thoughts in their daily living - you've managed to bring out a realistic reading. Well penned.

Mario De Paz

Date: 6/1/2013 4:54:00 AM

Who, as me, loves animals and owns dogs appreciates this naive thought of the animal rendered free by his owner. It perceives man as a thing for licking which emits strange sounds. But the dog is able to understand these strange sounds while man hardly is able to interpret barking!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 5/21/2013 7:33:00 PM

I like this poem you may want to check your spelling don't worry I misspell everything all the time. Great poem poet

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/14/2013 10:08:00 AM

A poser for me, but great read. Congrats on your membership renewal!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 8:04:00 AM

I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Patrizia. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol

Patrizia Cohen
Date: 7/11/2012 8:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Carol!