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Try doing that with your wheelchair. Let's see how ' unharmed'  you emerge :D

Dogs

My hands, smelly, brown, it's truly heinous...
I love those dogs, I do! But it's dubious
I'll ride my wheels again through grass!
Clean after them please? I'm simply FURIOUS...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Asuncion Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:01 PM
nice verse on dogs.. congrats on being selected
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Thank you :)
La France Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Darren, I love dogs too but it is a problem at my apartment building also, very selfish of those dog owners to not clean up, and congratulations on having your poem selected as a Feature Poem this week.
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:39 PM
And yes, dog owners sometimes. ... Not everyone though fortunately.
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings :)
Austin Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:37 AM
I can relate. Congrats on the selection. daver
White Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Thanks, just wish that it weren't this angry poem they chose, I love my wheels, I hate (sometimes the darn) dogs ;)
White Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:16 AM
LOL, that just THIS poem is chosen to be featured on Soup's home page for this week is hilarious :D I wrote it because I was angry, hahahahaha!
Salehi Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Cute... Your poem should be classified as Rubai not Rubaiyat. If you have more than one quatrain then it becomes Rubaiyat.
Salehi Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 5:22 PM
I realized that you change the form.. this is a very cute poem
White Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:43 PM
I know, I am still working on the remaining three rubaiyat, for the contest ;)
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Oh dear Darren - this is an issue I feel strongly about ... I've written many poems about poop or many poop poems I'm not sure lol one of my faves is the dog pooh fairy lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 6, 2016 at 11:34 AM
LOL Jan :) Yep, and then wheel home first before you can wash your hands and clean that chair. Hahaha, found that limerick of yours, so funny! Darren xxx
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