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Doggy Doo Blues

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Susie stepped in a pile of dog pooh It was caked on the sole of her shoe Her shoes how they stank The smell was so rank To remove it what should Susie do? Susie wiped mucky shoes on the mat The mat on which her pussycat sat Now it’s not on her shoes But the cats got the blues This poop issue we need to combat Consider folks who are in a wheelchair They wheel round but some dog owners don’t care - Imagine just how it feels Dog poop all over the wheels At poopy hands they must just sit and stare 03~12~17

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2017 8:34:00 PM

LOL...this I can relate to. I have two boys who get it on their shoes too often. We have to laugh about it!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 5:26:00 PM

Its so infuriating Rhonda - dog poop is a real pet hate of mine!:-( hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/16/2017 5:07:00 PM

Lol, this is so funny! (Until i personally step in one of the landmines, lol!) Thanks for the chuckle Jan!~Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2017 6:54:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Cheryl:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 3/15/2017 7:37:00 AM

Too funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2017 6:53:00 PM

I do write a lot of poop poems I have to admit lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maria Williams

Date: 3/13/2017 6:24:00 PM

Very cleverly written Jan. You've addressed the "poop" issues with humour.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2017 6:39:00 PM

I write a lot of poop poetry or poems about poop - I'm not too sure lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/13/2017 8:49:00 AM

Wow! Quite the image! You captured a thought we rarely realize! Your talent's not "crusty," with humor you mete out truths!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2017 9:08:00 PM

LOL

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2017 9:08:00 PM

LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2017 6:01:00 PM

ha ha ha I will remember that crusty line - eww lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 3/13/2017 6:11:00 AM

I once wrote how I rode my wheels right through it, and the immediate results...YUCK... Thanks for this one Jan :) HUGS

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2017 6:02:00 PM

I thought you would appreciate this bit of poop Darren :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2017 8:50:00 AM

Yikes, Darren...the angst! My husband feels nauseous at the smell. BIG HUG to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2017 8:33:00 PM

hahaha. Never thought of THAT before!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2017 6:06:00 PM

:-)hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/12/2017 6:32:00 PM

One of my pet peeves...ugh

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2017 6:48:00 PM

mine too I hate it - they are talking about dna testing the offending piles and fining the owners - such a shame the minority of owners allow it to happen - there is absolutely no reason not to clear it up:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/12/2017 5:20:00 PM

Oooh... sh...what a funny situational poem. We got Abby a dog for Christmas, I've had my fair share of cleaning up their ... presents lol. good to see you keeping your humor hugsx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2017 5:22:00 PM

aww bless I am sure Abby adores her new pet but I don't want to see their 'gifts' or step in them lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2017 3:57:00 PM

- I have to teach my dogs cleaning :) - Love it, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2017 4:08:00 PM

It really is a pet hate of mine Anne lise:-( hugs Jan xx